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Mar 12 12, 10:52
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They're boiled beaten, bullied and as a last, final insult, fed to human beings to eat
ALan
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Mar 12 12, 12:34
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tooweet... came the wee sound from an overlooked egg... perhaps protesting that it's not to eat ?
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Mar 12 12, 23:02
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Toe at the starting line, he tenses for the sound of the starter's gun. Face and shells both blank.
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Mar 13 12, 11:56
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Grandson #5; Grandchild #6
both blink at Reese's cry; Dana and Glenn's new son comes safe and sound at 4:15 A M
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Mar 13 12, 12:07
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WAKE UP CALL (but still can't smell the coffee !)
Wake up ! the baby's here so says my feisty wife and I struggle off the ward foor with pride ....
ALan
(True story)
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Mar 13 12, 19:36
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Okay Daniel and Alan,
I'll do two and end with the same ending to get us back on track.
Am glad to hear all's well with your new grandson, who's both five and six before getting to one.
With pride, Alan gets up and off the hard ward floor. A requirement when a wife speaks to one.
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Mar 14 12, 00:36
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LIFE'S RACE, ALMOST RUN
Two, one, starter's zero. Too late, old bod can not get in to starter's blocks comes last
Alan
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Mar 14 12, 08:07
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calm lasts until Alan shrieks in embarrassment both of his legs cramped in the blocks rear high
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Mar 14 12, 08:26
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Rear high and gallop off west into the sunset. The Lone Ranger added, Heigh-Yo Silver.
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Mar 14 12, 08:51
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sliver in his big toe stopped Alan in his tracks letting all of his opponents lap him
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Mar 14 12, 14:28
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Lapped hem: the dressmakers best device for keeping textiles from raveling without seam tape.
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Mar 14 12, 17:59
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Seen, typed, these my letters ? Having fingers so large make them seem like made of butter, melted
Alan
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Mar 16 12, 14:13
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Melted gone with the wind seeping into the ground starting another journey to snow again
Alan
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Mar 20 12, 08:20
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A gain has no value when it comes by deceit. Honor is the price you must pay for it.
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Mar 20 12, 11:27
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Forint Hungarian money before Euro how they yearn for them "good ol' days" Ole !
Alan
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Mar 20 12, 14:22
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O lay your head on me unburden all your pain and I will offer ear and heart to heal
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Mar 21 12, 00:18
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Toe, heel, toe, heel, toe, heel the policeman repeats. Sobriety tests are like a tight rope.
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Mar 21 12, 01:17
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I'M PRISONED
Thai trope or latin tongue languages intrigue capture the mind, if not the heart also
Alan
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Mar 21 12, 08:51
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all sew and no fun-time can make you all bound up; a good joke may well keep you in stitches
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Mar 21 12, 12:28
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Stitch us with your humor so that we may all laugh. Mend our darn moods by basting us with yarns.
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