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Aug 3 03, 10:06
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CINQUAIN: From the French, meaning "a grouping of five."
The Cinquain has five lines of two, four, six, eight, and two syllables, respectively, with a total syllabic count of 22.
The cinquain should have no more than two full sentences.
The Handbook of Poetic Forms suggests: Do not add words to fill out this form; write with feeling, but do not allow your writing to become cloyingly sweet; build toward a climax and put a surprise into your last two lines. Rather than parts of speech, be concerned with thoughts and images.
The cinquain came to popularity by Adelaide Crapsy, who devised the form back in the early 1900's. She was so influenced by the Japanese forms, tanka and haiku, that she developed her own poetic system which she then called cinquain.
The most famous of the few Crapsy cinquains from her The Complete Poems is:
TRIAD
These be Three silent things: The falling snow... the hour Before the dawn... the mouth of one Just dead.
Cinquains, though they have never become very popular, have always attracted a number of poets who are still developing the form.
Why not try your own here in this thread! Come on! We dare you! :p
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Cleo_Serapis Cinquain Aug 3 03, 10:06 Dear Grace and Michelle
Both brilliant !
REQ... Nov 6 03, 17:11 Dove QUOTE (Alan @ Nov. 06 2003, 15:11)REQUEST STO... Nov 6 03, 23:01 JustDaniel QUOTE (Dove @ Nov. 06 2003, 22:01)Scattered
... Nov 6 03, 23:35 Dove Just Daniel
how many syllables are in 'tsa? i... Nov 6 03, 23:55 Cybele Good Morning everyone.
Great brain food this ... Nov 7 03, 01:05 Dove QUOTE (Cybele @ Nov. 06 2003, 23:05)Good Morn... Nov 7 03, 01:34 Cybele My pleasure Dove
This is great fun!!
... Nov 7 03, 01:56 Cybele Hello Michelle,
Thank you for the comment. ... Nov 7 03, 02:02 THE PROBOSCIS CANNOT LIE, BUT IT CAN GROW .....
D... Nov 7 03, 02:56 Cybele Good Morning Sir Knight
Nice one Alan, I like i... Nov 7 03, 03:19 JustDaniel QUOTE (Dove @ Nov. 06 2003, 22:55)Just Daniel... Nov 7 03, 06:11 JustDaniel QUOTE (Cybele @ Nov. 07 2003, 02:19)Good Morn... Nov 7 03, 06:25 JustDaniel QUOTE (Cybele @ Nov. 06 2003, 09:08) Aah... Nov 7 03, 06:45 Cybele Hey Dan the Man
QUOTE How many syllables in ... Nov 7 03, 06:48 JustDaniel QUOTE (Cybele @ Nov. 07 2003, 05:48)[b]Hey Da... Nov 7 03, 07:01 Cybele Feud? Sure! VERY NIFTY Daniel
Mew... Nov 7 03, 07:35 JustDaniel QUOTE (Cybele @ Nov. 07 2003, 06:35)Feud? Sur... Nov 7 03, 08:09 Dear Grace
"Mew!! Cuss
that dratted cat... Nov 7 03, 08:16 Ecthsthract from a dental epic-sode
He mithed
hit... Nov 7 03, 08:22 JustDaniel QUOTE (Alan @ Nov. 07 2003, 07:22)Ecthsthract... Nov 7 03, 08:48 Dear Daniel
Ow weh ! Das tut weh !
FLOO... Nov 7 03, 09:11 Cybele Hey Alan
Pork pies!
Three cheers Alan
Novoca... Nov 7 03, 09:31 WHAT ALES THEE, FALSTAFF ?
Yer pie
and yer chips ... Nov 7 03, 09:46 Cybele Tough one Alan,
QUOTE Yer pie
and yer chips to... Nov 7 03, 12:37 Dear Grace
Well modified !
WEAKER(MINDED) S... Nov 7 03, 12:50 MODAL'TY FORD
Paint it
"Any Color" Ford,
Had ... Nov 7 03, 20:16 Cybele Well done Sir Knight
Good riposte!
A BIENT... Nov 8 03, 00:10 JustDaniel QUOTE (Cybele @ Nov. 07 2003, 23:10)Well done... Nov 8 03, 07:38 Dove QUOTE (Just Daniel @ Nov. 08 2003, 05:38)to a... Nov 8 03, 17:29 JustDaniel QUOTE (Dove @ Nov. 08 2003, 16:29)
Turtle Rac... Nov 8 03, 19:03 Cybele Good morning Daniel
No Contest
Life long
ago ... Nov 9 03, 01:26 JustDaniel QUOTE (Cybele @ Nov. 09 2003, 00:26)Good morn... Nov 9 03, 07:10 Cybele QUOTE Good morning to you as well, fine Lady Grace... Nov 9 03, 07:46 JustDaniel
Well, Grace... that is either quite a stretch... ... Nov 10 03, 01:39 Cybele QUOTE Well, Grace... that is either quite a stretc... Nov 10 03, 02:34 JustDaniel QUOTE (Cybele @ Nov. 10 2003, 01:34)QUOTE Wel... Nov 11 03, 07:11 Cybele Hi Daniel,
Gladys is a girl's name - at least... Nov 14 03, 07:30 JustDaniel QUOTE (Cybele @ Nov. 14 2003, 06:30)Hi Daniel... Nov 14 03, 08:06 Cybele Hi Dan, :wave:
QUOTE Pain de guerre
as wh... Nov 14 03, 11:23 JustDaniel QUOTE (Cybele @ Nov. 14 2003, 10:23)Hi Dan, ... Nov 14 03, 23:07 Cybele Good Morning Dan,
QUOTE break-through
Sweet f... Nov 15 03, 00:24 JustDaniel QUOTE (Cybele @ Nov. 14 2003, 23:24)Good Morn... Nov 15 03, 04:36 Cybele Aah Daniel !
My favourite film!
too ... Nov 15 03, 10:07 JustDaniel QUOTE (Cybele @ Nov. 15 2003, 09:07)Aah Danie... Nov 16 03, 02:50 Dove QUOTE (Just Daniel @ Nov. 16 2003, 00:50)aren... Nov 16 03, 03:27 Cybele Love it !!
Good to meet you here again... Nov 16 03, 04:06 JustDaniel QUOTE (Cybele @ Nov. 16 2003, 03:06)Love it ... Nov 16 03, 06:29 Cybele Hey there Dan,
Not English pronunciation, tryi... Nov 16 03, 08:19 JustDaniel QUOTE (Cybele @ Nov. 16 2003, 07:19)Hey there... Nov 16 03, 17:55 Cybele Good Morning Dan,
dry ink well
‘s ink wanes
as... Nov 17 03, 02:26 JustDaniel QUOTE (Cybele @ Nov. 17 2003, 01:26)Good Morn... Nov 17 03, 07:00 Cybele Hello Daniel,
You will find cinquain in the di... Nov 17 03, 07:38 JustDaniel QUOTE (Cybele @ Nov. 17 2003, 06:38)Hello Dan... Nov 17 03, 09:06 Dove QUOTE (Just Daniel @ Nov. 17 2003, 07:06)Cup ... Nov 18 03, 17:34 Dear Dove
Lovely !
As it
happens, a zit
can... Nov 18 03, 17:56 Dove what's vit cee?...some kind of overseas ointme... Nov 18 03, 18:39 Vitamin C !
I wanted it to be as near A Zit a... Nov 18 03, 18:41 Cybele Good Morning Sir Knight
QUOTE As it
happens, ... Nov 19 03, 01:57 Dear Grace
Wasn't Daniel wot queried the Cee ... Nov 19 03, 02:16 Cybele Hi Alan,
No, I realise that. I was referring to... Nov 19 03, 03:54 JustDaniel QUOTE (Alan @ Nov. 19 2003, 01:16)Dear Grace
... Nov 19 03, 04:14 Cybele Good Morning Daniel,
Trust all your nasty littl... Nov 21 03, 01:56 JustDaniel QUOTE (Cybele @ Nov. 21 2003, 00:56)Good Morn... Nov 21 03, 04:20 Dove QUOTE (Just Daniel @ Nov. 21 2003, 02:20)Rock... Nov 21 03, 20:00 JustDaniel QUOTE (Dove @ Nov. 21 2003, 19:00)Laughing at... Nov 22 03, 08:01 Athena Can anyone get in on this act? Must one tie their... Nov 25 03, 07:25 Cybele Hi all.
Will it spoil the fun to post just an ord... Dec 2 03, 08:10 Dear Grace
This is all Daniel's fault. I post... Dec 2 03, 11:33 Cybele Well, thank you Sir Knight
I have the urge to w... Dec 2 03, 11:45 AMETHYST Does that...
old fairy tale
still tell of maidens... Dec 2 03, 12:12 Dear Liz
Nice thought, line 4 1 syll short !
... Dec 2 03, 12:42 AMETHYST Hi Alan,
Oooops, I cannot believe I did that.. m... Dec 2 03, 13:29 Cybele Where are you?
my voice
calls out to you
but Wint... Dec 2 03, 17:28 Cybele Good Morning Sir Knight
I bestow you with the ne... Dec 6 03, 02:27 Cybele Hi Liz,
Frenchmen,
I thought handsome
with t... Dec 6 03, 02:34 Cybele Hello Dolly,
( I do like saying that, it makes ... Dec 6 03, 02:43 Cybele Unseen graces
sleepless..
summer’s perfumes
drift... Dec 6 03, 02:47 Dear Grace,
Errrrrr, um, yes. So glad you spotted... Dec 6 03, 02:48 Cybele Great riposte Alan!!
I am feeling a li... Dec 6 03, 03:00 Dear Grace
SOMA WRONG AND SOMA WRITE
It's ana... Dec 6 03, 03:21 Cybele Hi Alan,
Forgive the informality in the title... Dec 6 03, 04:12 Cleo_Serapis Self worth.
Where do you hide
when I need you to b... Dec 15 03, 21:08 Cleo_Serapis Teaching
is intriguing,
very enlightening;
a great... Jan 5 04, 18:33 JustDaniel to dream
perchance to quain
‘til I can scarce rest... Jan 6 04, 11:39 Cybele Hello Daniel
QUOTE to dream
perchance to quain
‘t... Jan 17 04, 03:15 Cybele Candle
light on your face
animating your smile
rem... Jan 20 04, 02:33 Athena Playing,
in many ways,
for old and young alike
is ... Jan 20 04, 03:08 Cleo_Serapis Lovely ladies! :) :) Jan 20 04, 06:19 JustDaniel Ok, ladies... time to take the wraps off. You... Jan 20 04, 07:37 Cleo_Serapis Cary?
What a poet
that young man is, with a
talent... Jan 20 04, 19:04 Cary
Grant, unlike Hugh
never played the villain.
... Jan 20 04, 19:21 Athena Hi Daniel,
Welcome aboard! What took you so ... Jan 21 04, 05:12 JustDaniel QUOTE (Athena @ Jan. 21 2004, 04:12)Hi Daniel... Jan 21 04, 07:25 Dear Daniel,
Deep six ?
It was not eye
that spied... Jan 21 04, 17:27 Dove Your wealth
made me lay you...
rotting six feet un... Jan 24 04, 17:49 Athena Ohhhhhhh Dear Jessica!
Excellent cinqu... Jan 24 04, 22:25 Cybele Dear Dove,
Naughty .....but nice
Greek Villa... Jan 25 04, 02:27 Cleo_Serapis QUOTE (Dove @ Jan. 24 2004, 17:49)Your wealth... Jan 25 04, 07:40 Cleo_Serapis QUOTE (Cybele @ Jan. 25 2004, 02:27)
Greek V... Jan 25 04, 07:41 JustDaniel QUOTE (Cybele @ Jan. 25 2004, 01:27)Greek Vil... Jan 27 04, 06:21
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