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CINQUAIN:  From the French, meaning "a grouping of five."  

The Cinquain has five lines of two, four, six, eight, and two syllables, respectively, with a total syllabic count of 22.

The cinquain should have no more than two full sentences.

The Handbook of Poetic Forms suggests:  Do not add words to fill out this form; write with feeling, but do not allow your writing to become cloyingly sweet; build toward a climax and put a surprise into your last two lines.  Rather than parts of speech, be concerned with thoughts and images.

The cinquain came to popularity by Adelaide Crapsy, who devised the form back in the early 1900's. She was so influenced by the Japanese forms, tanka and haiku, that she developed her own poetic system which she then called cinquain.

The most famous of the few Crapsy cinquains from her The Complete Poems is:

TRIAD

These be
Three silent things:
The falling snow... the hour
Before the dawn... the mouth of one
Just dead.


Cinquains, though they have never become very popular, have always attracted a number of poets who are still developing the form.

Why not try your own here in this thread! Come on! We dare you!  cool.gif  :p


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- Cleo_Serapis   Cinquain   Aug 3 03, 10:06
- -   Dear Grace and Michelle Both brilliant ! REQ...   Nov 6 03, 17:11
- - Dove   QUOTE (Alan @ Nov. 06 2003, 15:11)REQUEST STO...   Nov 6 03, 23:01
- - JustDaniel   QUOTE (Dove @ Nov. 06 2003, 22:01)Scattered ...   Nov 6 03, 23:35
- - Dove   Just Daniel how many syllables are in 'tsa? i...   Nov 6 03, 23:55
- - Cybele   Good Morning everyone.   Great brain food this  ...   Nov 7 03, 01:05
- - Dove   QUOTE (Cybele @ Nov. 06 2003, 23:05)Good Morn...   Nov 7 03, 01:34
- - Cybele   My pleasure Dove   This is great fun!! ...   Nov 7 03, 01:56
- - Cybele   Hello Michelle, Thank you for the comment. ...   Nov 7 03, 02:02
- -   THE PROBOSCIS CANNOT LIE, BUT IT CAN GROW ..... D...   Nov 7 03, 02:56
- - Cybele   Good Morning Sir Knight Nice one Alan, I like i...   Nov 7 03, 03:19
- - JustDaniel   QUOTE (Dove @ Nov. 06 2003, 22:55)Just Daniel...   Nov 7 03, 06:11
- - JustDaniel   QUOTE (Cybele @ Nov. 07 2003, 02:19)Good Morn...   Nov 7 03, 06:25
- - JustDaniel   QUOTE (Cybele @ Nov. 06 2003, 09:08) Aah...   Nov 7 03, 06:45
- - Cybele   Hey Dan the Man QUOTE How many syllables in ...   Nov 7 03, 06:48
- - JustDaniel   QUOTE (Cybele @ Nov. 07 2003, 05:48)[b]Hey Da...   Nov 7 03, 07:01
- - Cybele   Feud? Sure!  VERY NIFTY Daniel Mew...   Nov 7 03, 07:35
- - JustDaniel   QUOTE (Cybele @ Nov. 07 2003, 06:35)Feud? Sur...   Nov 7 03, 08:09
- -   Dear Grace "Mew!! Cuss that dratted cat...   Nov 7 03, 08:16
- -   Ecthsthract from a dental epic-sode He mithed hit...   Nov 7 03, 08:22
- - JustDaniel   QUOTE (Alan @ Nov. 07 2003, 07:22)Ecthsthract...   Nov 7 03, 08:48
- -   Dear Daniel Ow weh ! Das tut weh ! FLOO...   Nov 7 03, 09:11
- - Cybele   Hey Alan Pork pies! Three cheers Alan Novoca...   Nov 7 03, 09:31
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- - Cybele   Tough one Alan,   QUOTE Yer pie and yer chips to...   Nov 7 03, 12:37
- -   Dear Grace Well modified ! WEAKER(MINDED) S...   Nov 7 03, 12:50
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- - Cybele   Well done Sir Knight Good riposte! A BIENT...   Nov 8 03, 00:10
- - JustDaniel   QUOTE (Cybele @ Nov. 07 2003, 23:10)Well done...   Nov 8 03, 07:38
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- - Cybele   Good morning Daniel   No Contest Life long ago ...   Nov 9 03, 01:26
- - JustDaniel   QUOTE (Cybele @ Nov. 09 2003, 00:26)Good morn...   Nov 9 03, 07:10
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- - JustDaniel   Well, Grace... that is either quite a stretch... ...   Nov 10 03, 01:39
- - Cybele   QUOTE Well, Grace... that is either quite a stretc...   Nov 10 03, 02:34
- - JustDaniel   QUOTE (Cybele @ Nov. 10 2003, 01:34)QUOTE Wel...   Nov 11 03, 07:11
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- - JustDaniel   QUOTE (Cybele @ Nov. 14 2003, 06:30)Hi Daniel...   Nov 14 03, 08:06
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- - JustDaniel   QUOTE (Cybele @ Nov. 14 2003, 10:23)Hi Dan,  ...   Nov 14 03, 23:07
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- - JustDaniel   QUOTE (Cybele @ Nov. 14 2003, 23:24)Good Morn...   Nov 15 03, 04:36
- - Cybele   Aah Daniel ! My favourite film! too ...   Nov 15 03, 10:07
- - JustDaniel   QUOTE (Cybele @ Nov. 15 2003, 09:07)Aah Danie...   Nov 16 03, 02:50
- - Dove   QUOTE (Just Daniel @ Nov. 16 2003, 00:50)aren...   Nov 16 03, 03:27
- - Cybele   Love it    !! Good to meet you here again...   Nov 16 03, 04:06
- - JustDaniel   QUOTE (Cybele @ Nov. 16 2003, 03:06)Love it  ...   Nov 16 03, 06:29
- - Cybele   Hey there Dan,   Not English pronunciation, tryi...   Nov 16 03, 08:19
- - JustDaniel   QUOTE (Cybele @ Nov. 16 2003, 07:19)Hey there...   Nov 16 03, 17:55
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- - JustDaniel   QUOTE (Cybele @ Nov. 17 2003, 01:26)Good Morn...   Nov 17 03, 07:00
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- - JustDaniel   QUOTE (Cybele @ Nov. 17 2003, 06:38)Hello Dan...   Nov 17 03, 09:06
- - Dove   QUOTE (Just Daniel @ Nov. 17 2003, 07:06)Cup ...   Nov 18 03, 17:34
- -   Dear Dove Lovely ! As it happens, a zit can...   Nov 18 03, 17:56
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- -   Vitamin C ! I wanted it to be as near A Zit a...   Nov 18 03, 18:41
- - Cybele   Good Morning Sir Knight QUOTE As it happens, ...   Nov 19 03, 01:57
- -   Dear Grace Wasn't Daniel wot queried the Cee ...   Nov 19 03, 02:16
- - Cybele   Hi Alan, No, I realise that. I was referring to...   Nov 19 03, 03:54
- - JustDaniel   QUOTE (Alan @ Nov. 19 2003, 01:16)Dear Grace ...   Nov 19 03, 04:14
- - Cybele   Good Morning Daniel, Trust all your nasty littl...   Nov 21 03, 01:56
- - JustDaniel   QUOTE (Cybele @ Nov. 21 2003, 00:56)Good Morn...   Nov 21 03, 04:20
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- - AMETHYST   Does that... old fairy tale still tell of maidens...   Dec 2 03, 12:12
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- - Cybele   Where are you? my voice calls out to you but Wint...   Dec 2 03, 17:28
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- -   Dear Grace SOMA WRONG AND SOMA WRITE It's ana...   Dec 6 03, 03:21
- - Cybele   Hi Alan, Forgive the informality in the title...   Dec 6 03, 04:12
- - Cleo_Serapis   Self worth. Where do you hide when I need you to b...   Dec 15 03, 21:08
- - Cleo_Serapis   Teaching is intriguing, very enlightening; a great...   Jan 5 04, 18:33
- - JustDaniel   to dream perchance to quain ‘til I can scarce rest...   Jan 6 04, 11:39
- - Cybele   Hello Daniel QUOTE to dream perchance to quain ‘t...   Jan 17 04, 03:15
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- - Athena   Playing, in many ways, for old and young alike is ...   Jan 20 04, 03:08
- - Cleo_Serapis   Lovely ladies! :) :)   Jan 20 04, 06:19
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- - Cleo_Serapis   Cary? What a poet that young man is, with a talent...   Jan 20 04, 19:04
- -   Cary Grant, unlike Hugh never played the villain. ...   Jan 20 04, 19:21
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- - JustDaniel   QUOTE (Athena @ Jan. 21 2004, 04:12)Hi Daniel...   Jan 21 04, 07:25
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- - Cleo_Serapis   QUOTE (Dove @ Jan. 24 2004, 17:49)Your wealth...   Jan 25 04, 07:40
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- - JustDaniel   QUOTE (Cybele @ Jan. 25 2004, 01:27)Greek Vil...   Jan 27 04, 06:21
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