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Feb 24 12, 09:06
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moon shines o'er Miami... but the question remains: does it shine over your ami as well?
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Feb 24 12, 09:29
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ON A MOON CALLED NARCISSUS
As well ask of the moon does it prefer shining in mid June, or on reflection in spoon ?
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Feb 24 12, 13:52
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in spoon held very still I was found reflecting... then recognized that I was in the soup
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Feb 24 12, 16:32
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HAS-BEEN, IN THE TUREEN
The soup is your new home ? Just how fly must one be to attract sullen waiter's gaze ? Garcon !
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Feb 25 12, 16:47
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Carson before Leno; whom next with the mantle of late-night Superman fall on ? Jimmy?
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Feb 25 12, 21:36
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Jim'ney - Cricket's the name, and cricket is the game which only gentlemen should play. Fine hope ....
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Feb 26 12, 12:19
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Fine hops hit stumps on pitch dislodging bails for outs. Bowlers use bats and Batsmen bowl. Confused?
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Feb 26 12, 13:44
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INNS AND OUTS
Confused ? Study game's laws Their ins and their outs you see, are multiply involved retire ....
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Feb 26 12, 14:22
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Retire the side with outs; just like a baseball game. Rules sound the same but our balls aren't wooden.
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Feb 26 12, 15:34
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COMPOSITION
Make-up of your fine balls is no concern of mine; such information is best kept well wrapped !
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Feb 26 12, 22:11
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Will ripped a high line drive over the shortstop's head; his left and center fielders met head-on.
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Feb 27 12, 01:02
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DEGENERATION
Head on collision : oldster's good traditions versus younster's "make it all up" en route ....
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Feb 27 12, 08:49
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unroot a seedling tree perhaps a conifer then deftly prune for two, three years a dwarf for example: . . . . . https://encrypted-tbn0.google.com/images?q=...r1PSV1PgSGGnJrw
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Feb 27 12, 16:17
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Add wharf to a long beach and strange birds will arrive as waves susurrate and bleed from sunsets.
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Feb 27 12, 17:05
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GROUNDED
Sun sets at end of day to rise again in the morning; more than can be said of this hulk, grounded ....
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Feb 28 12, 08:01
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ground Ed was substitute when cannibal swore off any more of his former chef's veggies
PS ground Chuck was the result of his previous attempt to swear off meat
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Feb 28 12, 10:09
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Wedges are tapered blocks used to separate things with ease. Distress comes when adding an I.
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Feb 28 12, 15:04
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and I will al-way-ays love you-ou-ou-ou-I will always lo-ove you - Whitney Houston
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Feb 28 12, 15:14
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Dear Daniel,
Oh, clever, and so sad. Well done.
Houston we have problem with our young Daniel - Howling Wolf and Muddy Waters duet
Alan
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Feb 28 12, 15:20
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Alan, you must have been posting your answer the same time as I was writing mine. I'll answer your's as well.
Hewed stone of huge tons may have to be placed on top of where she's placed to stop fortune seekers.
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Do it all together and the hue's tone won't sound like wolf's howling over muddied water
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