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Jul 11 11, 13:07
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The trough Sows sough and cough Dough grows on bough and hough Plough the clough and the soil will slough Ugh - ly
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Jul 12 11, 13:51
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Ugh! Lee or Halladay or Hamels is the choice if you face Philadelphia's Phillies
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Jul 13 11, 00:10
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Phil lies! He does not make the best cheesesteak sandwich. Vilotti-Pisanelli rolls make it.
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Jul 15 11, 18:53
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EVEN BETTER THAN 'ENGLISH' BREAKFAST
Make it the best ever sliced steak, fried onions in french stick with sesame seeds for me
Alan McAlpine Douglas (in memory of Mary'd 'Gullivers' food van on A22 near East Grinstead)
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Jul 20 11, 08:22
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Former purveyors of different sandwiches add an olive or twist to it. More please!
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Jul 21 11, 01:52
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NO PRESSURE
'More pleas !' The whip threatened; the executioner needs input, to know precise blade pressure ....
Alan
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Jul 21 11, 16:14
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Press your neck in the slot. See the empty basket? It depicts what you have given in life.
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Jul 23 11, 22:11
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inn life can be hollow between the travelers with no one around to impress to death
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Jul 25 11, 00:10
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STRUCK DUMB
Too deaf ? Not possible, when one is confronted with the cacophony today's youth likes ....
Alan
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Jul 25 11, 09:05
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Sorry Alan, I am a bit late in replying to Daniel's post and want to comply with the parameters of this thread so I have answered both entries and concluded mine with the same ending. Hope you don't mind!
Daniel's
To Death… a harsh sentence or a macabre tribute; unless you aren’t the one being toasted
and Alan's
Youth likes and their dislikes in music and volume prove decibels still leave your ears toasted
Larry
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Jul 29 11, 02:30
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A TOAST : MAN'S INHUMANITY TO MAN
Toasted marmaladed consumed in bite-size chunks; who'd be a slice of steam-cooked dough- white bread ?
Alan McAlpine Douglas
PS Larry - Do not mind in the least - even if you had not done one to mine !
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Jul 29 11, 10:51
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White bread: A glutinous mass of pulverized wheat; leavened, bleached, made palatable… barely!
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Aug 1 11, 08:11
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barley is great in soup adding a hearty taste especially to a rich beef gravy
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Aug 1 11, 23:27
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Gravy with sausage bits, poured over hot biscuits… Stop! All this talk of food makes me hungry.
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Aug 2 11, 00:15
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THE GOULASH TO END ALL GOULASHES
Hung'ry and Austria together were Empire but made a right goulash of things world war
Alan McAlpine Douglas
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Aug 2 11, 07:42
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whirled door confuses folks who have never seen one and simply want to get into the store
P.S. ... and Alan, I'm not all that hungary; I just broke fast at the Green Olive (which is owned by Turks) in Hopewell.
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Aug 2 11, 13:28
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Ms. Pelled Bow Teak
Thus tore awl weighs opined their close fitchew bettor, imp lying summer much chi purr ‘Nuthers
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Aug 2 11, 15:26
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hiss staria
mothers must sit a spell to stare at the letters focused on by misdirected pupils
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Aug 3 11, 08:02
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Pupils myopically grope for enlightenment; illumination enters those open.
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Aug 3 11, 08:15
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upon a midnight clear a bird with outstretched wings dared asking me to give my name: "who? who?"
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