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Larry
post Jul 11 11, 13:07
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The trough
Sows sough and cough
Dough grows on bough and hough
Plough the clough and the soil will slough
Ugh - ly


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post Jul 12 11, 13:51
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Ugh! Lee
or Halladay
or Hamels is the choice
if you face Philadelphia's
Phillies


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Larry
post Jul 13 11, 00:10
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Phil lies!
He does not make
the best cheesesteak sandwich.
Vilotti-Pisanelli rolls
make it.


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post Jul 15 11, 18:53
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EVEN BETTER THAN 'ENGLISH' BREAKFAST

Make it
the best ever
sliced steak, fried onions
in french stick with sesame seeds
for me

Alan McAlpine Douglas
(in memory of Mary'd 'Gullivers' food van on A22 near East Grinstead)


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Larry
post Jul 20 11, 08:22
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Former
purveyors of
different sandwiches
add an olive or twist to it.
More please!


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post Jul 21 11, 01:52
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NO PRESSURE

'More pleas !'
The whip threatened;
the executioner
needs input, to know precise blade
pressure ....

Alan


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post Jul 21 11, 16:14
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Press your
neck in the slot.
See the empty basket?
It depicts what you have given
in life.


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post Jul 23 11, 22:11
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inn life
can be hollow
between the travelers
with no one around to impress
to death




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post Jul 25 11, 00:10
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STRUCK DUMB

Too deaf ?
Not possible,
when one is confronted
with the cacophony today's
youth likes ....

Alan


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post Jul 25 11, 09:05
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Sorry Alan, I am a bit late in replying to Daniel's post and want to comply with the parameters of this thread so I have answered both entries and concluded mine with the same ending. Hope you don't mind!


Daniel's

To Death…
a harsh sentence
or a macabre tribute;
unless you aren’t the one being
toasted

and Alan's

Youth likes
and their dislikes
in music and volume
prove decibels still leave your ears
toasted



Larry


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post Jul 29 11, 02:30
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A TOAST : MAN'S INHUMANITY TO MAN

Toasted
marmaladed
consumed in bite-size chunks;
who'd be a slice of steam-cooked dough-
white bread ?

Alan McAlpine Douglas

PS Larry - Do not mind in the least - even if you had not done one to mine !


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post Jul 29 11, 10:51
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White bread:
A glutinous
mass of pulverized wheat;
leavened, bleached, made palatable…
barely!


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post Aug 1 11, 08:11
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barley
is great in soup
adding a hearty taste
especially to a rich beef
gravy


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post Aug 1 11, 23:27
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Gravy
with sausage bits,
poured over hot biscuits…
Stop! All this talk of food makes me
hungry.


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post Aug 2 11, 00:15
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THE GOULASH TO END ALL GOULASHES

Hung'ry
and Austria
together were Empire
but made a right goulash of things
world war

Alan McAlpine Douglas


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post Aug 2 11, 07:42
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whirled door
confuses folks
who have never seen one
and simply want to get into
the store




P.S. ... and Alan, I'm not all that hungary; I just broke fast at the Green Olive (which is owned by Turks) in Hopewell.


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post Aug 2 11, 13:28
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Ms. Pelled Bow Teak

Thus tore
awl weighs opined
their close fitchew bettor,
imp lying summer much chi purr
‘Nuthers


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post Aug 2 11, 15:26
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hiss staria

mothers
must sit a spell
to stare at the letters
focused on by misdirected
pupils


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post Aug 3 11, 08:02
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Pupils
myopically
grope for enlightenment;
illumination enters those
open.


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When power leads man toward arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the areas of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of his existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.
John Fitzgerald Kennedy



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post Aug 3 11, 08:15
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upon
a midnight clear
a bird with outstretched wings
dared asking me to give my name:
"who? who?"


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