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Nov 14 14, 01:03
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spied 'er cruisin' the mall with a buff teenaged dude... but then I recognized that it was not she
and, ok, Larry... (and to hopefully tie the two poem-endings together!)
his head was unadorned and he was strangely white; ah, I now see that he's neo- Nazi
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Nov 14 14, 17:27
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gnats see everything large but with each perspective come the sweeping reality of mites
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Nov 15 14, 05:31
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if might proves that I'm right you can be sure that you will be winning all our future debates
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Nov 16 14, 14:43
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d-baits catch larger fish re-baits sell more new cars and flowers are bee-baits. logic a-bates
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Nov 16 14, 20:56
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agates are for children who have lost their marbles and are bent on finding something solid
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Nov 17 14, 18:34
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salad for a light lunch can be a healthy meal but for dinner, I want teeth to meet meat
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Nov 21 14, 14:28
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meet mate at least half way in all disagreements and your marriage is likely to prosper
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Nov 24 14, 12:11
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phosphor gives heat and light especially in fish, they're in water so it does not cook them
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Nov 26 14, 04:24
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cook trims his greens for soup he'll make from the turkey that his family's Thanksgiving meal features
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Nov 26 14, 14:46
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foot tours on Thanksgiving begin when husbands watch football while wives stand in long lines to shop
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Nov 28 14, 01:32
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to shop on Thanksgiving seems unnecessary since lines for internet shopping are short
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Nov 28 14, 14:57
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our shorts and apparel' when she buys them on line, are hard to return when they don't quite fit
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Nov 29 14, 03:34
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quit fight and wear them tight; remember good old days when your mother and wife suffered girdles
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Dec 1 14, 00:41
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gird less of your body in tight-fitting clothing and you will wind up being the nudest
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Dec 1 14, 02:00
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knew dissed auld naturist who avoided hiding his emotions or anything besides
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Dec 1 14, 14:55
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b-sides on old records contain songs that aren't hits, this practice seemed to border on venal
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Dec 1 14, 16:20
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penal colonials? are they the ones who place their things inside the place where stuff comes out?
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Dec 2 14, 00:36
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come shout innuendoes like the lumberjack song but full montys python up the wrong tree
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Dec 2 14, 02:19
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ring tree by removing bark at the tree's bottom; next year the thing will be ready fire wood
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Dec 3 14, 14:33
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fire wood comes in boxes and they call them matches if you're itching to warm your bones just scratch
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