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Feb 5 14, 23:55
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In spires bells are ringing gathering all who hear to share their thoughts about the world with us
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Feb 12 14, 07:47
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With us words are painted on note-worthy canvas teeming with "life's" inspiration Re-live
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"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the RingsCollaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. KanterNominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here! "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner 
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Feb 17 14, 10:22
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relief is a massage of both body and mind loosening each unused muscle past tense
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Feb 18 14, 15:40
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past tents pitch campy thoughts of wooded vacations where fireside toasts kept us warm moon's glow
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"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the RingsCollaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. KanterNominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here! "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner 
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Feb 27 14, 00:54
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moon's glow erased the lines etched into old faces enhanced the silver hair of our twilight
Lori, only 7 syls for L4 in your last post!
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Feb 27 14, 01:44
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twilight of all the gods oh what a noisy lot keeping on for hours and more hours singing
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Mar 1 14, 23:25
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singing through branches bare the wind across the snow joins with the cardinals to sound new tunes
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Mar 2 14, 01:39
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newt tunes are quite sublime indeed subliminal they're 'can't get you out of my mind' no less
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Mar 3 14, 16:27
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no lease means the contract for renting has been rent; at least the lessor has thought it unwise
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Mar 3 14, 17:43
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one wise two are wiser but three are the wisest they travelled for many a mile brought gifts
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Mar 4 14, 00:18
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bought gifts may bring pleasure but the greatest given began when all was started with one breath
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Mar 4 14, 03:13
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one chest or two cases treasures beyond riches for if you are that way inclined travel
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Mar 4 14, 08:28
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gravel provides traction when there's snow on the road but if it's in an inch of ice you'll slide
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Mar 4 14, 09:58
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you'll slide so easily into oblivion unless you make your manly mark in life
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Mar 4 14, 23:17
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in life as well as death one may be remembered by words and a soft caress when they touch
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Mar 5 14, 01:36
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they touch and separate and then they touch again for that is the way of the world for aye
Alan
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Mar 5 14, 10:58
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for 'ay a horse'll neigh but if ya git too nigh ya could end up in a great big foray
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Mar 5 14, 19:45
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Four A's and a B plus was my best report card but now, I can't remember the subjects
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Mar 5 14, 21:32
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subject none but yourself to examination as to the things that motivate the heart
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Mar 5 14, 23:38
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the heart is a muscle but the mind and the soul are what makes it worthwhile for hearts to beat
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