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Apr 11 13, 00:04
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fowl one and air force one : they are synonymous, both carry connotations of chicken
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Apr 11 13, 00:12
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chicks in Air Force are WAC's but I doubt if they wax because they have a hairy job to do
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Apr 11 13, 00:19
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ado much about nothing that's Shakespeare all over words words words, but where is the meat ? She said ....
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Apr 11 13, 02:50
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Cheese Heads thrive in Green Bay even though they faltered in the 2012 Season... 'Go Pack'
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Apr 11 13, 05:18
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go pack your bags and go never darken my door whichis already black as night pitch dark
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Apr 11 13, 09:59
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dark pitch runs down the wall where you tried to repair my badly-leaking roof... which now seeps black
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Apr 11 13, 13:15
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black sheep aren't always black and lots of them aren't sheep but all will pull wool over eyes I've herd
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Apr 11 13, 14:08
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ewe herd most correctly; some are a bit rammy, but it's the horny ones you must avoid
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Apr 11 13, 14:15
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a void is a vacuum you find in outer space where there is dust but no place to plug in
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Apr 11 13, 14:30
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plug in where the hole fits whatever appendage you are capable of using today
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Apr 12 13, 16:38
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to daze use a small club in temporal regions if one tap doesn't do the trick toucan
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Apr 12 13, 21:56
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toucans of gasoline results in a large bill that could put quite an ugly bite on you
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Apr 13 13, 12:18
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Dear Daniel,
Applause ! Sheer genius ! And Larry's one before also brilliant.
Love Alan
One ewe one more = ewer wash your hands, naughty bhoy for directions to marine traffic
Alan
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Apr 14 13, 19:11
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Thank so much, Alan...
I had a response for you early this morning, but for some reason, though I could read everything, whenever I tried to post or message, it said that the site was not available on the internet!!
... so I'll try to compose myself... and another response:
traffic in these cinquains; you may end up playing football with the Bhoys of Glasgow Scotland
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Apr 14 13, 21:29
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Hi Daniel - there was a problem with the server this morning (after 3:30am that I alerted Peter to after spending more than 4 hours myself trying to rectify it. I could not post new topics, reply, edit or send PM's an I was really upset about it! In the end, he restarted the web server and that seemed to fix the issues. He's got a few core dumps to dredge through to try and debug exactly what happened see what locked it up, but from what he can see the little program that actually processes the request when you click "post" crashed and wasn't accepting any new requests, which spiraled into not being able to send PM's and post replies as well. Restarting the web server appears to have woken it back up. I believe he and I resolved it around 5:30 this evening (and then I saw Merlin post a times ten afterwards). ~Cleo
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"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the RingsCollaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. KanterNominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here! "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner 
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Apr 15 13, 03:41
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Scoot-Land invaded our site attempting to confuse those served; owners had to restart server
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Apr 15 13, 03:58
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Server and not master that was Thatcher's secret. Devoted to British nation; Amen
Alan
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Apr 15 13, 09:45
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Ah, men! said the woman... but was it in disgust or with some internal longing? Who knows?
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Apr 15 13, 09:57
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Hoo knows Hoo velly blight Hoo has much good knowledge Hoo is velly intelli gent Hoo-ha !
Alan
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Apr 15 13, 12:11
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Who haws when the he-haws are coming from the yard? Could it be Farmer MacDonald? He hays.
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