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Alan
post Apr 11 13, 00:04
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fowl one
and air force one :
they are synonymous,
both carry connotations of
chicken

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Larry
post Apr 11 13, 00:12
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chicks in
Air Force are WAC's
but I doubt if they wax
because they have a hairy job
to do


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Alan
post Apr 11 13, 00:19
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ado
much about nothing
that's Shakespeare all over
words words words, but where is the meat ?
She said ....

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JustDaniel
post Apr 11 13, 02:50
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Cheese Heads
thrive in Green Bay
even though they faltered
in the 2012 Season...
'Go Pack'


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Alan
post Apr 11 13, 05:18
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go pack
your bags and go
never darken my door
whichis already black as night
pitch dark

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JustDaniel
post Apr 11 13, 09:59
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dark pitch
runs down the wall
where you tried to repair
my badly-leaking roof... which now
seeps black


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post Apr 11 13, 13:15
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black sheep
aren't always black
and lots of them aren't sheep
but all will pull wool over eyes
I've herd


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post Apr 11 13, 14:08
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ewe herd
most correctly;
some are a bit rammy,
but it's the horny ones you must
avoid


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post Apr 11 13, 14:15
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a void
is a vacuum
you find in outer space
where there is dust but no place to
plug in


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post Apr 11 13, 14:30
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plug in
where the hole fits
whatever appendage
you are capable of using
today


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post Apr 12 13, 16:38
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to daze
use a small club
in temporal regions
if one tap doesn't do the trick
toucan


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post Apr 12 13, 21:56
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toucans
of gasoline
results in a large bill
that could put quite an ugly bite
on you


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post Apr 13 13, 12:18
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Dear Daniel,

Applause ! Sheer genius ! And Larry's one before also brilliant.

Love
Alan

One ewe
one more = ewer
wash your hands, naughty bhoy
for directions to marine
traffic

Alan


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post Apr 14 13, 19:11
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Thank so much, Alan...

I had a response for you early this morning, but for some reason, though I could read everything, whenever I tried to post or message, it said that the site was not available on the internet!!

... so I'll try to compose myself... and another response:

traffic
in these cinquains;
you may end up playing
football with the Bhoys of Glasgow
Scotland




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post Apr 14 13, 21:29
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Hi Daniel - there was a problem with the server this morning (after 3:30am that I alerted Peter to after spending more than 4 hours myself trying to rectify it. I could not post new topics, reply, edit or send PM's an I was really upset about it!
In the end, he restarted the web server and that seemed to fix the issues. He's got a few core dumps to dredge through to try and debug exactly what happened see what locked it up, but from what he can see the little program that actually processes the request when you click "post" crashed and wasn't accepting any new requests, which spiraled into not being able to send PM's and post replies as well. Restarting the web server appears to have woken it back up.
I believe he and I resolved it around 5:30 this evening (and then I saw Merlin post a times ten afterwards).
~Cleo


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post Apr 15 13, 03:41
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Scoot-Land
invaded our site
attempting to confuse
those served; owners had to restart
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post Apr 15 13, 03:58
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Server
and not master
that was Thatcher's secret.
Devoted to British nation;
Amen

Alan


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post Apr 15 13, 09:45
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Ah, men!
said the woman...
but was it in disgust
or with some internal longing?
Who knows?


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post Apr 15 13, 09:57
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Hoo knows
Hoo velly blight
Hoo has much good knowledge
Hoo is velly intelli gent
Hoo-ha !

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post Apr 15 13, 12:11
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Who haws
when the he-haws
are coming from the yard?
Could it be Farmer MacDonald?
He hays.


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