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May 28 16, 10:08
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cantaloupe after honeymoon salad Russian dressing on the side
watermelon grows in tended patch
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May 29 16, 01:31
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Hi Daniel and Larry,
You seem to be all over the place!
Nice septolets. I can't comment on all of the them, but I do feel like having a taste of those juicy watermelons, cantaloupes, the Russian salad and peas...mmm....
I also appreciate Larry's snide septolet about Hillary! Quite so...
But what about The Donald?
Thank God our elections are over and we may be heading in the right direction, at last. Tough year ahead, though, with all the corruption that has to be sorted out and, if possible, the money recovered from the criminals in the former government.
Hope you keep going with these different forms. I followed your rather, er... naughty limericks...LOL.
This thread also needs to be started again. A lot of the old entries should be archived.
Never mind, Syl
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Mis temas favoritos The Lord replied, my precious, precious child, I love you and I would never leave you. During your times of trial and suffering, when you see only one set of footprints, it was then that I carried you.
"There is no life higher than the grasstops Or the hearts of sheep, and the wind Pours by like destiny, bending Everything in one direction."
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May 29 16, 01:34
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Ornate Oracle

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BTW, there's a new William Blake challenge in Acropolis. Hope you join in!
Syl
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Mis temas favoritos The Lord replied, my precious, precious child, I love you and I would never leave you. During your times of trial and suffering, when you see only one set of footprints, it was then that I carried you.
"There is no life higher than the grasstops Or the hearts of sheep, and the wind Pours by like destiny, bending Everything in one direction."
Sylvia Plath, Crossing the Water, Wuthering Heights. Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here!MM Award Winner 
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May 29 16, 14:33
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patch over eyes keeps Sylvia from seeing
the innuendos hidden about pregnancy in puns
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May 31 16, 19:48
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QUOTE (Psyche @ May 29 16, 02:31 )  Hi Daniel and Larry,
You seem to be all over the place!
Nice septolets. I can't comment on all of the them, but I do feel like having a taste of those juicy watermelons, cantaloupes, the Russian salad and peas...mmm....
I also appreciate Larry's snide septolet about Hillary! Quite so...
But what about The Donald?
Thank God our elections are over and we may be heading in the right direction, at last. Tough year ahead, though, with all the corruption that has to be sorted out and, if possible, the money recovered from the criminals in the former government.
Hope you keep going with these different forms. I followed your rather, er... naughty limericks...LOL.
This thread also needs to be started again. A lot of the old entries should be archived.
Never mind, Syl Thanks for visiting, Sylvia. I'm glad that your elections are over there. I wish they were here! I'm pleased that you've looked in on our word play with each other. We always hope others will join us in the practicing. It really does help one be flexible. And every once in a while we produce something that has potential! QUOTE (Psyche @ May 29 16, 02:34 )  BTW, there's a new William Blake challenge in Acropolis. Hope you join in!
Syl Larry has already posted his response to the challenge, including in the critique section! I've only had a chance so far to barely get started dealing with it.
deLighting in the heads-up, Daniel
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Jun 1 16, 03:31
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QUOTE (Larry @ May 29 16, 15:33 )  patch over eyes keeps Sylvia from seeing
the innuendos hidden about pregnancy in puns punning helps Sylvia to remain innocent
her eyes may freely view our friends' creativity
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Jun 2 16, 13:42
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create levity and curiosity but maintain innocence
when possible to get your point across
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Jun 2 16, 21:36
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a cross on Calvary Hill
brought darkness for three hours and Light for eternity
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Jun 4 16, 07:38
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eternity is promised to those who believe
faith conquers death and darkness with Light
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Jun 9 16, 19:55
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with sleight of hand he threw
attention from the hat with a hidden rabbit
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Jun 13 16, 14:27
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rub it with hands that are slight;
crystal ball reflects small fingers and fortunes
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Jun 14 16, 04:28
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four tunes on his I-pod constantly play
is it any wonder he repeats himself?
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Jun 14 16, 22:02
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hymns shelf may contain great works of art
illustrating the mood of the author
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Jun 15 16, 08:38
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authority may become abused innocently by the guilty
it's insidious how it takes over
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Jun 15 16, 21:45
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take cover and supplies when you evacuate
hurricane season has now arrived with Spring
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Jun 16 16, 06:34
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with spring come rain and flowers
which go well in beds that are outside
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Jun 17 16, 14:28
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outside temperatures are over one hundred degrees
flowers are gasping for some cold water
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Jun 19 16, 13:43
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cold water splashed in your face
a wake-up-call welcomed on a hot summer day
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Jun 20 16, 13:08
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summer days once seemed to last forever
when youthful but age feels the heat
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Jun 21 16, 01:03
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feel the heat on summer's longest day
just proves it gets hotter when short
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