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Nov 25 15, 08:16
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flow of blood increases when you let go of your sliced finger; so keep the pressure on with that sterile piece of gauze tightly holding it on your cut until we get to the hospital
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Nov 25 15, 19:57
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tall mountains are covered with hard packed ice under the snow caps that melt and coalesce and may cause an avalanche which races down to the valley or join glaciers for the long hard grind
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Nov 25 15, 22:51
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Those I love will gather to celebrate Thanksgiving wishes and enjoy each other's feast and cocktail offerings, a little football, lots of laughs and plenty of glorious moments
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Nov 26 15, 00:21
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meant to send you and yours a wonderful Thanksgiving greeting and wish you all the best in this holiday season and may next year be much better than anything you could imagine.
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Nov 26 15, 10:35
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Thanks for dropping in, Lori! I'm thankful for all the activity on your site of late!!! jeans I wear demonstrate that I'm thankful for having lost weight and can just hang out comfortably with my kin enjoying a sumptuous meal that we didn't cook for the first time
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Nov 30 15, 14:29
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time to shop for next year could be right now with all of the sales when they give stuff away for little or nothing and before the returns are on shelves waiting for those last minute shoppers.
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Dec 1 15, 04:13
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purse empty at our home while we're fixing up our new old house hoping to move in spring then fix up our present home for someone else to move in there while we hope they won't destroy the thing!
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Dec 3 15, 10:14
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things
with a
owner’s stuff
makes him take care
of what’s important,
not that he needs money
to survive but can pass on
his possessions to ones who love
something about what they inherit.
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Dec 4 15, 05:23
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a kiss
it is not intended as acrostic but you may keep on practicing your penchant for wrapping everything in words that summarize the things you write and go to the heart of your nonets
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Dec 7 15, 19:24
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nets may catch lots of things but thoughts are rare which might be enmeshed in such porous trappings so walls of words must be built to contain meanings held within and emphasize them like a picture.
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Dec 8 15, 08:07
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your end-word means to trap and enmesh me? you build a word-wall that means to confound me? why would you do such a thing? true friends would never act this way! I would never end with a scribble! I hope you see the tongue-bulge in my cheek!
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Dec 8 15, 15:06
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bull is bad as was mine but the options that could be used are more limited. your, which you utilized could have been you’re, tour, sure and a few more if I went through my thesaurus or used the alphabet
Bet you like this ending better!
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Dec 8 15, 18:19
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bet your life you're bettor if you can't help wagering each time someone enters the room or your team or your friend's plays or the wind speed has just increased or a Muslim has moved in next door
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Dec 9 15, 21:39
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doors keep out unwanted with bolts and locks and maybe alarms so Muslims can’t get in because life is a gamble and you can bet that the Koran will not make a terrorist peaceful
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Dec 10 15, 04:25
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full wallets guarantee nothing at all except the pressure they put on your pocket that makes you want to get rid of that uncomfortable thing -- your rocker or old automobile
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Dec 11 15, 18:10
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bills you get for buying all those presents can be a good proof that it is much better for you to give than receive whenever you hear a child laugh in enjoyment as you write the checks.
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Dec 12 15, 07:57
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check the kids and you'll see what they play with: the box they came in rather than the presents that you carefully planned to buy because you knew what they wanted and hoped that they would appreciate
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Dec 14 15, 22:06
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ate too much Thanksgiving and gained some weight but I will work it off when I put toys together while playing one of Santa’s elves so I can look like them and not him.
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Dec 15 15, 01:51
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hymns are sung in worship because we love to praise our Savior and to remind ourselves of the many things in which we have been blessed and are thankful while sharing in our joy with others
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Dec 17 15, 15:06
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hers were not tears of pain but of great joy that she’d been chosen to be mother of Christ; from among all the women she was blessed and so exalted that even the angels sang praises.
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