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Cleo_Serapis
post Oct 19 04, 16:06
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Real Name: Lori Kanter
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Hi all. wave.gif

Liz has permission to post this form here and I think it sounds like a FUN poetic style...

Here's the scoop as stated on Poetry911:

How could a simple six line verse with four iambs in first and second line, two iams in the third, then repeated again in the next three lines, not have been written before?

Anyway, the form is:
4 iambs with end rhyme A
4 iambs with end rhyme A
2 iambs with end rhyme B
4 iambs with end rhyme C
4 iambs with end rhyme C
2 iambs with end rhyme B
Where usually some kind of summary or counterpoint to the two preceding lines goes on the B line.

Liz summarizes this new form as:
QUOTE
The requirements are iambic meter...

Line Length is 884884 for each stanza
the rhyme scheme goes AABCCB ...

Its fun! wink.gif

Hugs, Liz


Here is an example from Liz....


All In The Mind...


The moon is full; an airy light
encircles it this eerie night.
A blood red ring.
The strangest shadow passes by
it floats across a blackened sky.
What was that thing?

I shiver; still I walk along
and look about--the shadows gone.
Afraid to see.
There's an evil presence a foot
a distant owl begins to hoot.
It's calling me.

When up ahead a witch on broom
begins to fly toward the moon.
A cackling caw.
She screeched and scowled into the dark,
it echoed through the streets and park.
Her hand a claw.

Her wicked hand reached out to me.
she tried to grab hold of my tee.
I raced away.
I headed home, and slammed the door
She could've followed, I'm not sure.
Here's where I'll stay.

The midnight hour had struck the clock
at twelve...ding dong, had sung tick tock.
What did this mean?
I hid beneath the candy seat,
and heard a voice say trick or treat...
It's Halloween!  ghostface.gif

Why not try it!
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