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Senryu, Japanese form: 5-7-5 or less |
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Oct 4 15, 08:23
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for something to eat play guitar on the corner; you may starve to death
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Oct 4 15, 09:02
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starve to death in May when April showers have stopped, flowers get thirsty
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Oct 4 15, 09:17
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flowers get thirsty if planted 'neath a shade tree; roots and leaves lap l'eau
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Oct 5 15, 22:56
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roots leave the water because too much will rot them; self moderation
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Oct 6 15, 07:59
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self-moderation: not driving through mud puddle near pedestrian
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Oct 7 15, 13:05
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new pedestrians cross streets while they are texting; writing epitaphs?
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Oct 7 15, 17:45
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texting epitaph a wise action while driving; your will will be done
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Oct 8 15, 17:38
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will your will be done before your epitaph is driven into stone
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Oct 9 15, 07:09
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driven into stone the texter leaves a message: put down the dumb phone!
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Oct 11 15, 23:42
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“put down the dumb phone!” that’s what I-phone users say; they think theirs are smart
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Oct 12 15, 11:24
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they think they're so smart but their phones lead them astray; Look out; it's a truck!
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Oct 13 15, 22:37
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It’s a truck look-out headlights shining in the field rednecks hunt at night
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Oct 15 15, 03:35
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red neck shunt at night: car-accident victim saved by passer-by doc
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Oct 15 15, 21:56
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doctor passed you by no insurance and lawyers blood on his new suit
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Oct 17 15, 16:20
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a bloody new suit: the Londoner's insurance attracted vampires
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Oct 20 15, 22:30
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attractive vampires turn ugly with the rare steak; just an ash in the pan
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Oct 21 15, 09:56
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an ass in the pan becomes red with the heat on; get out the ice packs
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Oct 22 15, 22:02
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get out of ice packs before they freeze together titanic problems
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Oct 23 15, 04:38
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tie tannic problems with drinking too much caffeine; switch to pure water
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Oct 24 15, 22:58
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witching pure water is a forgotten art form well developed sprig
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