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Sep 18 14, 03:30
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TRULY BLESSED
pigeons poop better when they are flying in large flocks and right overhead
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Sep 18 14, 10:09
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air farce
to write overhead using the sky for paper is plane exercise
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Sep 19 14, 06:34
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Dad's Dancing
a plain exercise used to call it Dad's dancing now that Zumba rules all
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Sep 19 14, 16:00
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food for thought
all the zombie rules will have to be written down more brains are required
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Sep 20 14, 00:32
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HEADLESSNESS RULES
more brains are required chickens run on quite heedless of good decorum
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Sep 21 14, 11:34
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a bridged version
rum décor is good lots of decorative bottles filled with empty lives
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Sep 21 14, 12:44
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HAVE ONE, NEED ANOTHER
empty lives filled with television and so forth like chinese snacking
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Sep 22 14, 15:25
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a boss or a loss
the sneaky Chinese invents chopsticks from rulers; Japanese Diet
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Sep 23 14, 04:41
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BALANCED DIET
Japanese diet make laws; Emperor ignores crackers and sushi
Alan
(diet, n: a legislative assembly in certain countries (e.g., Japan) )
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Sep 24 14, 08:07
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the ritz charlatan
so she ate crackers while pretending to be friends a crumby bed mate
Yes Alan, that is what I was referring to in my piece! The Chinese chopped up "Japanese rulers"... "Diet" during many of their wars. Oh, please don't shout!
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Sep 25 14, 01:02
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Dear Larry,
Now I have your comment, I see much more in your faux-ku than I saw before. Very clever indeed. I looked up diet and found ruling assemblage, but did not backward-connect.
JUST DESSERTS : SERVES YOU RIGHT
a crumbly bed mate fifty year plus marriage priapic ? no chance
Alan
PS Is size 3 bold acceptable for title ?
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Sep 25 14, 14:13
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Alan, actually, bold with no caps is how Daniel started the string.
the art of losing
no prior pick chance makes an artistic winner to gamble is Toulouse
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Sep 25 14, 15:40
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come and go
to gamble, to gain and to lose all in a flash that is the essence
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Sep 26 14, 14:22
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computer litters
the e-sense is that which children possess to know their parents have none
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Sep 29 14, 01:33
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generation
their parents had none of the great advantages but they scrimped and saved
Alan
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Oct 1 14, 15:30
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trans in dental
saving their scrimshaw walrus battle to the death they're long in the tooth
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Oct 2 14, 03:39
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don't look a gift dynosaur in the mouth
who's long in the tooth common or garden dentist or found dynosaur ?
Alan
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Oct 3 14, 13:21
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in sir shun
our dinosaur found a faux-ku with no title dubbed it Senryu
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Oct 5 14, 14:32
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marry, sir, art thou larry ?
I dub thee Sir Night for those in a great hurry was best I could do
Alan
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Oct 6 14, 00:09
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language of the hurt
adieus was called best for friends saying their good-byes I do's aren't for friends
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