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JustDaniel
post Nov 30 15, 21:11
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dude plops
his bag of junk
in a donation box
that says it's for a charity
and that they are athletic supporters;
they say many a jock straps on
their placards front and back
to advertise
dude pops


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post Nov 30 15, 22:32
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Hey Daniel & Larry,

Great fun!!! Your poems are cool and great sources of inspiration. This one is an early bird for me (it's only 10 pm).


gum drops
sugary fun
my dentist's BFF
childhood flashback in fruit colors
I eat them like peanuts during stake outs
fast energy for a run down
perps can streak when spotted
specials fly too
gun drop
 
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post Dec 1 15, 03:35
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mug drops
as he's feeling
particularly down;
his face becomes even twisted
because he can't find the keys to his car
and he's going to be late to work...
then he checks his pocket
grabs his coffee...
drops mug!


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Larry
post Dec 3 15, 10:19
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drop smug
patronizing
smile that is on your face
because you have some cavities
due to bad dental hygiene and brushing
and it’s going to cost you a lot
when all you had to do
was to floss and
prod gums


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JustDaniel
post Dec 4 15, 05:42
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products
made in China
are sold at all WalMarts
and the public appreciates
being able to buy their stuff cheaper
than what you would pay at the mall
or for department stores'
slightly better
products



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Larry
post Dec 4 15, 14:48
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pro ducks
the hockey puck
that's flying at his face
because he left his new mouthpiece
on the bench with a new set of dentures
that he got after the last game
when he was playing with
California's
pro Ducks


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JustDaniel
post Dec 5 15, 00:46
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prophets
in the Bible
gave advice to the king
and predicted great happenings
but there were many who were unfaithful
not representing God at all
saying positive things
simply to make
profits


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Larry
post Dec 7 15, 19:23
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perfects
relaxation
just by being a cat
when it crawls up in someone’s lap,
curls into a ball and is fast asleep
making it irresistible
to pet and scratch its ears
and they get their
purr fix


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post Dec 8 15, 01:47
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pour facts
on white paper
proving that you're the one
who is perfect for employment
in the position that they have described
in the personal ad sent you
but then find out too late
that you've sent one
poor fax


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post Dec 8 15, 23:23
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[size="3"][/size]
Seal fat
Oh so tasty.
I caught the beast today.
Speared it with vengeance for my leg.
I forgot it had teeth. Damn stupid me.
Now I'm called Peggy and not Fred
but not today. Ahab
is my new name.
BITE THAT!!!!


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post Dec 9 15, 07:38
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bit hat
because I bet
that you had the facts wrong
and if not that I would eat my hat
so here I am, hat in hand, starting on
the long process of digesting
cloth, cardboard, whatever
is there since I
bit hat


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post Dec 9 15, 21:38
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hit bat
by accident
when I was driving home
because insects were attracted
to my headlights shining on the highway
and since the bat hunts by radar
he didn’t see my car
so bugs smashed and
bat hit.


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post Dec 10 15, 04:51
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bathe it
with love and care
and change its diapers
after feeding it all day long
between long spells of crying or sleeping
and your intermittent cat-naps
and phone call to your mom
asking her to
bathe it


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post Dec 11 15, 18:08
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bath hit
for the ladies
is bubbles and perfume,
a luffa and a nice long soak
but when you’re dirty and smell like a goat
after a long hot day at work;
before hugging your wife
get undressed and
hit bath


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post Dec 12 15, 08:17
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hot breath
could be garlic,
a need to brush your teeth
or gargle with some Listerine
or simply desire to have your wife's kiss
but whate're it is, keep breathing
or you won't discover
what really was
hot breath


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post Dec 14 15, 22:04
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hot broth
made with chicken
helps you to feel better
when you have a cold or fever
if someone is there to fix it for you
but if both of you are too sick
you’ll have to call mother
who’ll come if you’re
both hot


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post Dec 15 15, 02:30
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brought tooth
should our fairy
desire to put money
in the spot where I leave the thing
under my favorite feather pillow
doing so while I am asleep
giving me a big tip
in place of the
tooth brought


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post Dec 17 15, 15:05
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bought truth
from a witness
even though it wasn’t
so he could escape his misdeeds
but with some good cross-examination
the judge found him guilty as sin,
put the witness in jail
and justice served
brought truth


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JustDaniel
post Dec 20 15, 14:07
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fought truth
in his mirror
while running for office
until the public gave feedback
at which time he pulled his name from the race
for some self - examination
during which he looked at
much of the hard
truth fought


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post Dec 20 15, 20:50
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Dumb thought.
I ate a fly.
Can I climb walls? Eavesdrop?
I'll find out about those hot stocks,
make a killing, get a McMansion or
would my brain grow really tiny
get scared of fly swattters?
Dang! My head hurts.
Deep thoughts.

 
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