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May 18 09, 05:47
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Hello Mary and welcome to MM! ![Balloons.gif](http://forumimages.mosaicmusings.net/style_emoticons/default/Balloons.gif)
As I just mentioned to Jeanne and Antonio (two other newbies to MM), here at MM, we offer honest, yet friendly feedback in our workshopping forums. I will enjoy reading your 'first person' poetry - keep in mind, readers will naturally assume the content is about yourself though (which makes for great conversations). I also enjoy looking for multi-meanings in poetry and often write in the same fashion as well with my own work - although my muse has been AWOL for several months now.
The level of critique varies from member to member based on their individual goals. It can take some time to get to know each other and what is being sought. Please do wander our halls, take in our colorful 'tiles' and join in the fun.
If you would be so kind, would you care to share a bit of your writing goals with us? What can we do to help? I hope you will find MM your new home!
Please let us know if you need any guidance navigating the site or with our participation rules or other goodies we offer.
Welcome! ~Cleo/Lori
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"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the RingsCollaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. KanterNominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here! "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner ![](http://www.mosaicmusings.net/images/IBPCtn.jpg)
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May 19 09, 07:17
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Hi Mary. We seem to have high and low periods. I'd say we're in a moderate period at the moment. I personally haven't been too active since January due to personal issues and am just now getting ready to get back into the swing of things here on site. As strange as this sounds, pretty much all of our staff has had health and/or other personal issues to work through which has limited our online time. We're trying to be as active as time and schedules allow. To answer your question, I think generally the weekends are busier here and the evening hours/early morning hours since we have members from around the world (different time zones). The most active forums are our two poetry critique forums, Herme's Homilies (fixed forms) and Seren's Synapse (free verse) followed by our challenge forums, The Acropolis (weekly challenges) and Pandora's Box (monthly challenges). I can run some board stats to confirm and reply back again later this evening. Cheers ~Lori
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"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the RingsCollaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. KanterNominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here! "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner ![](http://www.mosaicmusings.net/images/IBPCtn.jpg)
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May 19 09, 08:12
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Ok - a quick stats update:
In Feb - we had 41 new topics posted in Mar - the number is 74 in Apr - the number is 73 and in May so far, we have 59.
For the same period our 'post' stats (exclude New topics) - posts are replies... In Feb - we had 266 posts in Mar - the number is 510 in Apr - the number is 449 and in May so far, we have 341.
We are steady and on the rise this month.
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"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the RingsCollaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. KanterNominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here! "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner ![](http://www.mosaicmusings.net/images/IBPCtn.jpg)
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May 19 09, 09:25
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You're most welcome! Hope to offer feedback on your poem in the next few days. At work so gonna ![running.gif](http://forumimages.mosaicmusings.net/style_emoticons/default/running.gif) for now! ~Cleo
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"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the RingsCollaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. KanterNominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here! "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner ![](http://www.mosaicmusings.net/images/IBPCtn.jpg)
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May 19 09, 15:16
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Mayo, or is it Mary? Welcome to MM, I am one of the staff here. I post a lot in the free verse section. I do hope you enjoy it here at MM. I am one of those that has health problems and have been absent a lot and maybe a lot in the future, I never know from day to day. I hope that if you have problems don't hesitate to ask. I used to post at a lot of different places, but now it is mostly here as I just dont have the time or energy to do more. I will go read some of your writing and hopefull at least comment there. Again most welcome. Steve
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May 20 09, 06:06
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G'day. Mary, Mate, the Earths flat. We are all suffering from deflation. And that's why, people turn to poetry for expression, to fill the surroundings with hot air and inflate the atmosphere with knowledge, to get things on an even keel again. SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOooo. Welcome. John.
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May 20 09, 07:45
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Hi mayo, And a warm welcome from me too. I'm a bit of a newbie and somewhat a novice here. I hope you enjoy the site as much as I do. There are some very gifted and talented poets here as well as friendly and helpful ones as well. I look forward to reading your work!!! Again, welcome!!! Peggy
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May 23 09, 01:51
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Good morning Mayo - I would like to welcome you to Mosaic Musings. Naturally, you will look around, and decide whether this site is for you - or not; but as a relative newcomer, I have found the criticisms and suggestions to be thoughtful, and honest. If something doesn't work - you will be told - but with the reasons clearly explained. This is not the largest poetry site around - but all the members treat the making of poetry with a certain amount of seriousness, leavened with great good humour. We hope to see a selection of your work when you have found an area that will suit your style. Leo
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May 28 09, 12:16
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Hi Mayo, It's a bit late to be welcoming you over here in 'Introduce Yourself?, but sometimes I prefer to go straight to the forums and see new poets' work, without knowing anything about them. It's also faster for me, since I have some problems not worth mentioning now.
So first of all, welcome to MM, and apologies for the delay!
I was following all the feedback and your answers to your poem "Mammogram", and became slightly confused as to what you're seeking in the forums. But never mind, I'll return there and post again.
I live in Argentina, so I'm not familiar with the term "a trained philosopher'. Does it mean that you have a University Degree in Philosophy?
I agree with you about seeking the truth in poetry. 'Seeking' is the key word for me, it's a good road to follow since one can express a great deal in a few lines instead of filling tomes full of dense reasonings. But finding truth is another matter, as you say!
Cheers, Sylvia***
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Mis temas favoritos The Lord replied, my precious, precious child, I love you and I would never leave you. During your times of trial and suffering, when you see only one set of footprints, it was then that I carried you.
"There is no life higher than the grasstops Or the hearts of sheep, and the wind Pours by like destiny, bending Everything in one direction."
Sylvia Plath, Crossing the Water, Wuthering Heights. Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here!MM Award Winner ![](http://www.mosaicmusings.net/images/IBPCtn.jpg)
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Jun 2 09, 23:33
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impressive.
do u plan on posting revisions or new versions. i want to know so as to offer only comments on meanings captured by me not poetical phrasing.
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Mis temas favoritos The Lord replied, my precious, precious child, I love you and I would never leave you. During your times of trial and suffering, when you see only one set of footprints, it was then that I carried you.
"There is no life higher than the grasstops Or the hearts of sheep, and the wind Pours by like destiny, bending Everything in one direction."
Sylvia Plath, Crossing the Water, Wuthering Heights. Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here!MM Award Winner ![](http://www.mosaicmusings.net/images/IBPCtn.jpg)
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Jun 3 09, 05:49
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QUOTE (Psyche @ Jun 3 09, 00:33 ) ![*](style_images/antique/post_snapback.gif) impressive.
do u plan on posting revisions or new versions. i want to know so as to offer only comments on meanings captured by me not poetical phrasing. I will post revision or new versions. Still testing the waters.
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