Hi Sergio,
A few small notes for you to ponder:
Julio had given Nikki an oily stare
when the realization of someone
dreaming
about of her brought in the cold.
What
would happen
s if they change
d the shade
of her copper skin and her eyes
are were no longer calico in the dream?
She was silent for an instant, but it was her
whispering in his dreams:
Calico eyes.
She followed him into the movies,
slipped her phone number into his hand
just to watch the leaf storm
wade around his body. She wanted
to touch, turn off the cigarette and lift,
lift him with her copper right there.
I wouldn't change the font here in the last line.As always, take or toss.
~Cleo