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Shrouded Echoes by Zeus, Crown Jewels Award winner

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Mosaic Master Group: Administrator Posts: 18,892 Joined: 1-August 03 From: Massachusetts Member No.: 2 Real Name: Lori Kanter Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Imhotep	Hello MM viewers! I'm awarding the Crown Jewels Award to this fine Sonnet. Way to go, Larry! Thanks for coloring the Mosaic in crowning style! :pharoah2 Check out this tile in the poetry forum, Plato's Pearls of Wisdom as well! Crown Jewels Award Celtic Castle Designs Shrouded Echoes A midnight luminescence veils the sea, it twinkles, bobbing in reflective rays. Celestial constellations in ballet as diamonds pas de duex in blackened tea. The moonlight skims across the crested waves... a phosphorescent glow of rippling foam, beneath the creatures effortlessly roam uncounted depths of salty water graves. Now through a liquid skyline sunrays peek, the sea’s so calm, with not a wave in sight. As wispy clouds disperse in wingless flight the day is new with glory that will speak. Aside a piece of driftwood floats on by, a gull was perched there, hesitant to fly. Copyright © Lawrence Carr ·············· "It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the Rings Collaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. Kanter Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here! "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life. MM Award Winner