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Aug 15 04, 08:06
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Mosaic Master
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Real Name: Lori Kanter
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Hi Larry! :knight:
This is absolutely stunning (as I've mentioned previously)! :lovie:
I have so many favorite images, it's hard to choose just one! :wall:
If I mus, it would be: Celestial constellations in ballet as diamonds pas de duex in blackened tea.
What a great imagination!
Glad you've put one this in the Polished works place to stay! :wizard:
~Cleo :cloud9:
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Oct 3 04, 20:42
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Hey Zeus,
This was a pleasure to read for some of the descriptive/adventurous language. It flows beautifully and the images are quite haunting...the big deep. An excellent effort :dance: :grinning:
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Mar 24 05, 21:48
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Ah, Zeus,
You have me swooning with your mastery of the romantic! What a way with words, you silvered tongued-devil, you! You have me bewitched, entranced. Too bad I'm married! Hey, if you could sweep me away to this place, I may conveniently forget that little factoid ('specially since my wedding ring is broken!!!)
LOVE YOU, Bud!
Nef
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Guest_Zeus˛_*
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Mar 29 05, 11:30
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DRB, thanks for your comments and stopping by. Larry
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Apr 3 05, 20:17
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This is a brilliant work. Dazzling imagery and fantastic poetics make this poem an absolute delight to read.
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Apr 5 05, 18:47
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Mosaic Master
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Joined: 1-August 03
From: Massachusetts
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Real Name: Lori Kanter
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Congrat on your Crown Jewels award winning tile Larry!
Well done! ~Cleo
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"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the RingsCollaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. KanterNominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here! "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner
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Apr 5 05, 18:52
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Hi Larry,
I'm delighted that you have an award for this piece - both for yourself and for me - because it has brought it to my attention - I hadn't seen it before.
Very well done and very well written.
James.
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Guest_Zeus˛_*
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Apr 6 05, 17:19
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James, appreciate your kind words and comments. Thank you,
Larry :)
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