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Cleo_Serapis
post Aug 11 04, 05:19
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QUOTE (CarrieAnn @ Aug. 09 2004, 22:39)
Sky Mirrors Water, Water Mirrors Sky

Easy
as a summer
breeze blowing out to sea.
I set my tiller to the gale
and spin
and spin
until landmasses all recede
and calm descends again.
Sky, sea, and one
thin line.  


Note:  This is a mirror cinquain:
2
4
6
8
2
2
8
6
4
2

As above, so below.  Want to try one?


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Ohhh CarrieAnn!

What a neat cinquain! Kind of like a double tet!  :detective:

We shoudl post this version as a New Topic, give an explanation of it and let our imagination soar!  :cloud9:

Cool!
~Cleo  :pharoah:


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post Aug 18 04, 10:26
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thin line
between cinquain
and what haiku are meant
to capture introspective peeks
outside


© Daniel J Ricketts 18 Aug 2004


P.S.  Your post in this thread is the first thing I've read of yours, Carrie Anne... since I have had to be scarce online of late... and will be for at least three weeks coming...  but I note that you live in my home State!  ...and my Dad lives right at Black Lake!  I'd be pleased to know a bit more about you as time goes on.  


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post Aug 27 04, 05:13
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Like this;
we sing and dance
with imaginitive
thoughts, phrases, people, places and
write on!



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write on
in cinquain train
by taking my last line
to twist it or take it as your
first line


Woo Woo!


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