Hi John!!
This is marvellous! You've created a completely new and beautiful scene, with your terrific use of images and words...I love the final stanza, so peaceful and yet so..delicious
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Lucie "What could have made her peaceful with a mind That nobleness made simple as a fire, With beauty like a tightened bow, a kind That is not natural in an age like this, Being high and solitary and most stern? Why, what could she have done, being what she is? Was there another Troy for her to burn?" WB Yeats "No Second Troy" MM Award Winner
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