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Feb 14 04, 06:03
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Hi Dolly and Alan,
Well, having thoroughly messed up your interactive haiku and at the request of Alan I call "fainites" (that Dolly roughly translated means I can't be punished for my transgressions or I call a truce!). So here we go, back to the original follow on
one born every year so, was Barnum's famous quote exaggerated?
Love
Grace
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Feb 14 04, 06:11
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Well, folks, I doubt if we can get any MORE interactive than this !
Love Alan
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Feb 16 04, 10:48
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QUOTE (Cybele @ Feb. 14 2004, 05:03) Hi Dolly and Alan,
Well, having thoroughly messed up your interactive haiku and at the request of Alan I call "fainites" (that Dolly roughly translated means I can't be punished for my transgressions or I call a truce!). So here we go, back to the original follow on
one born every year so, was Barnum's famous quote exaggerated? Love
Grace I wonder if I can help put this back in order...
QUOTE Believe it or Notexaggerated fantasies abound in minds of most writing folk© D R Harris - 14 February 2004of most writing folk it can be truly said that words are their true friends
- Cybele should a poet askew…
words are their true friends… at least when they’re in order… though they seldom are
© M Lee Dickens’son 16 Feb 2004
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Feb 17 04, 02:46
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Reality
though they seldom are we want friendships to be loyal love works hard to bind
© D R Harris - 16 February 2004
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Mar 12 04, 04:16
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Love works hard to bind lovers who gave up their lives to raise their children.
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Mar 13 04, 03:23
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To raise their children people strive to teach them well; must be done with love
© D R Harris - 13 March 2004
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Jun 6 04, 08:43
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Must be done with love, in you I see a splendour opening hearts wide.
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Jun 11 04, 06:16
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opening hearts wide risks the entrance of scoundrels but open I’ll be
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Jun 11 04, 17:26
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BILLY
Butt open ? I'll be damned if that's the way to get drink from a tin can.
Alan McAlpine Douglas
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Jun 12 04, 07:38
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Drink from a tin can even with an aftertaste, this slimfast shake's GOOD!
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Jun 12 04, 08:05
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This slimfast shake's GOOD even better it'll be once poundage come off!
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Jun 12 04, 13:40
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once found, age comes off as though it has deep wisdom but it's head's died... white
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Jun 20 04, 08:33
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But if head's dyed white, what'll happen when roots grow? Skunk shall be thy name.
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Jun 20 04, 14:55
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shrunken be thy name though all you ever wanted comes... but ain't enough
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Jun 20 04, 15:37
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Comes... but ain't enough hot sauce on those chicken wings! Hot flashes are few!
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"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the RingsCollaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. KanterNominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here! "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner
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Jul 8 04, 06:21
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Going through the change brings intriguing emotions of life's mysteries.
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"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the RingsCollaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. KanterNominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here! "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner
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Jul 10 04, 09:39
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fife's mini-series wouldn't drum up much business; it's just a pipe dream
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Jul 20 04, 16:05
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It's just a pipe dream that becomes reality when you make it so.
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Jul 20 04, 23:30
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America Bets on Ross
when we made her sew did stars and stripes forever; had to raise a staff
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