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Aug 19 03, 08:14
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Resplendent crispy stirring leaves, drop softly toward the ground. Within bright beauty through the trees, soft pastels “hush” the sound.
Twirling, whirling, holding tight smooth contours; windspun song. Fluttering breezes, foliage flight drift dancers clinging long.
Matchless outlines tinted deep, peach, crimson; vista’s bliss. Blended gold-lime sundries seep dyed bouquets; nature’s kiss.
Waltzing freefall takes its course, Fall’s season shortly ages. Reminders flash away with force, calm Autumn’s vivid stages.
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Aug 19 03, 11:47
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Absolutely stunning Lindi!
Course, Autum is also my favorite season! I love the way the leaves do 'waltz on air'...twirling and dancing.......
This is filled with color and imagery so complete for the setting. One of my new Aphrodite favorites! I hope you'll win that weekly contest for this one! ???
Thanks for adding another lovely tile to our Mosaic in style!
HUGS! ~Cleo
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Aug 19 03, 12:20
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Aug 19 03, 16:40
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QUOTE (Aphrodite @ Aug. 19 2003, 08:14) Resplendent crispy stirring leaves, drop softly toward the ground. Within bright beauty through the trees, soft pastels “hush” the sound.
Twirling, whirling, holding tight smooth contours; windspun song. Fluttering breezes, foliage flight drift dancers clinging long.
Matchless outlines tinted deep, peach, crimson; vista’s bliss. Blended gold-lime sundries seep dyed bouquets; nature’s kiss.
Waltzing freefall takes its course, Fall’s season shortly ages. Reminders flash away with force, calm Autumn’s vivid stages. Hi again Aphrodite
Well you sure have done it again....this is wonderful.
The images you have presented here are breathtaking
I particularly love " waltzing freefall"
"swirling wirling"
"autumn's vivid stages"......Ooooh and lots more!
I also think the rhythm flows beautifully.
Read you again Eisa
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Aug 21 03, 08:26
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QUOTE (Eisa @ Aug. 19 2003, 16:40) QUOTE (Aphrodite @ Aug. 19 2003, 08:14) Resplendent crispy stirring leaves, drop softly toward the ground. Within bright beauty through the trees, soft pastels “hush” the sound.
Twirling, whirling, holding tight smooth contours; windspun song. Fluttering breezes, foliage flight drift dancers clinging long.
Matchless outlines tinted deep, peach, crimson; vista’s bliss. Blended gold-lime sundries seep dyed bouquets; nature’s kiss.
Waltzing freefall takes its course, Fall’s season shortly ages. Reminders flash away with force, calm Autumn’s vivid stages. Hi again Aphrodite Well you sure have done it again....this is wonderful. The images you have presented here are breathtaking I particularly love " waltzing freefall" "swirling wirling" "autumn's vivid stages"......Ooooh and lots more! I also think the rhythm flows beautifully. Read you again Eisa Hello Eisa~
Thanks, for the sparkling comments! I do appreciate your kind words, very much.
In love~ Aphrodite
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Sep 4 03, 18:01
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Very fine, and easily takes one through autumn's delights and memories.
Appreciating your comfort, Brahms
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Sep 4 03, 18:05
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Your action is so very good with autumn life, thanks.
Brahms
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Sep 5 03, 13:46
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Sep 5 03, 13:47
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