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CINQUAIN:  From the French, meaning "a grouping of five."  

The Cinquain has five lines of two, four, six, eight, and two syllables, respectively, with a total syllabic count of 22.

The cinquain should have no more than two full sentences.

The Handbook of Poetic Forms suggests:  Do not add words to fill out this form; write with feeling, but do not allow your writing to become cloyingly sweet; build toward a climax and put a surprise into your last two lines.  Rather than parts of speech, be concerned with thoughts and images.

The cinquain came to popularity by Adelaide Crapsy, who devised the form back in the early 1900's. She was so influenced by the Japanese forms, tanka and haiku, that she developed her own poetic system which she then called cinquain.

The most famous of the few Crapsy cinquains from her The Complete Poems is:

TRIAD

These be
Three silent things:
The falling snow... the hour
Before the dawn... the mouth of one
Just dead.


Cinquains, though they have never become very popular, have always attracted a number of poets who are still developing the form.

Why not try your own here in this thread! Come on! We dare you!  cool.gif  :p


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- Cleo_Serapis   Cinquain   Aug 3 03, 10:06
- - AMETHYST   WITH WINGS HIS FATHER MADE USING FEATHERS AND WAX ...   Aug 3 03, 11:09
- - AMETHYST   Quote  Cleo Friendships: blossoming love, ...   Aug 3 03, 11:11
- - AMETHYST   WELCOME TO THE CINQUAIN CHALLENGE, WHERE YOU CHALL...   Aug 3 03, 10:33
- - Cleo_Serapis   Thanks Amethyst! :) I LOVE a challenge!   OK he...   Aug 3 03, 10:40
- - AMETHYST   QUOTE Friendships: blossoming love, nurturing bond...   Aug 3 03, 11:02
- - Cleo_Serapis   Rose Buds; petals unwrap frangrant bouquets of lif...   Aug 3 03, 10:12
- - Cleo_Serapis   Hi Liz...I know this is a pain and I'm working on ...   Aug 3 03, 11:27
- - Cleo_Serapis   QUOTE (AMETHYST @ Aug. 03 2003, 11:02)A wonde...   Aug 3 03, 11:29
- - Cleo_Serapis    :juggle: Daybreak. Wakens creatures to it'...   Aug 21 03, 05:20
- - JustDaniel   to youse used ewes: Two ewes commiserate about a ...   Oct 16 03, 05:05
- -   Dear Daniel Another derlicious joke from you, but...   Oct 16 03, 21:24
- - JustDaniel   QUOTE (Alan @ Oct. 16 2003, 21:24)Dear Daniel...   Oct 17 03, 11:01
- -   Dear Daniel Sorry, don't understand. What was...   Oct 17 03, 12:37
- - Michelle   Hey Daniel, I miss your presence here. And you...   Oct 25 03, 04:14
- - JustDaniel   QUOTE (Alan @ Oct. 17 2003, 12:37)Dear Daniel...   Oct 25 03, 05:54
- - JustDaniel   QUOTE (Michelle @ Oct. 25 2003, 04:14)Hey Dan...   Oct 25 03, 06:15
- - Michelle   Ahhh Daniel, I knew you could do it!  lo...   Oct 25 03, 18:40
- -   DINNER TIME Sandwich course provides lunch. Then ...   Oct 25 03, 19:27
- - JustDaniel   Hey, Alan!  I've just composed this one to...   Oct 26 03, 15:28
- -   "Iamb de Master" - Daniel I'mb tolled you are...   Oct 26 03, 15:47
- - JustDaniel   QUOTE (Alan @ Oct. 26 2003, 14:47)"Iamb de Ma...   Oct 26 03, 16:08
- -   "Sandwiched in ryely with mayo Lightly" : Daniel ...   Oct 26 03, 19:35
- - JustDaniel   QUOTE (Alan @ Oct. 26 2003, 18:35)"Sandwiched...   Oct 27 03, 00:31
- -   Sub Lime'n'All Dearly Berated, we are ga...   Oct 27 03, 02:08
- - JustDaniel   QUOTE (Alan @ Oct. 27 2003, 01:08)Sub Lime...   Oct 27 03, 06:26
- - Michelle   I ain't complainin' guys, just without a p...   Oct 27 03, 19:23
- - JustDaniel   QUOTE (Michelle @ Oct. 27 2003, 18:23)I ain...   Oct 28 03, 00:25
- - Michelle   Rock on, stone and pummel, cast chips of Rosetta, ...   Oct 28 03, 10:10
- - Michelle   Blockades explode skyward, dust barren land of min...   Nov 4 03, 23:55
- - Dove   QUOTE (Michelle @ Nov. 04 2003, 21:55)Blockad...   Nov 5 03, 01:07
- - Michelle   Excellent Dove! I'm so glad you've j...   Nov 6 03, 00:26
- - Cybele   Hi Michelle, I have just found this thread and ...   Nov 6 03, 02:59
- -   Dear Grace Nice little story. You've almost ...   Nov 6 03, 03:11
- - Cybele   Good Morning Sir Knight Thanks for the help Ala...   Nov 6 03, 03:38
- -   Dear Grace Like it ! Sorry about the "wrecke...   Nov 6 03, 04:40
- - Cybele   Hey there Alan, Not very inspired. I still have t...   Nov 6 03, 06:21
- -   Dear Grace If this one is not inspired, then I lo...   Nov 6 03, 07:27
- - Cybele   Hello again Alan  :knight: Aah! Now you...   Nov 6 03, 10:08
- - Michelle   Hi Grace, that's an excellent cinquain. These...   Nov 6 03, 11:51
- -   Dear Grace and Michelle Both brilliant ! REQ...   Nov 6 03, 17:11
- - Dove   QUOTE (Alan @ Nov. 06 2003, 15:11)REQUEST STO...   Nov 6 03, 23:01
- - JustDaniel   QUOTE (Dove @ Nov. 06 2003, 22:01)Scattered ...   Nov 6 03, 23:35
- - Dove   Just Daniel how many syllables are in 'tsa? i...   Nov 6 03, 23:55
- - Cybele   Good Morning everyone.   Great brain food this  ...   Nov 7 03, 01:05
- - Dove   QUOTE (Cybele @ Nov. 06 2003, 23:05)Good Morn...   Nov 7 03, 01:34
- - Cybele   My pleasure Dove   This is great fun!! ...   Nov 7 03, 01:56
- - Cybele   Hello Michelle, Thank you for the comment. ...   Nov 7 03, 02:02
- -   THE PROBOSCIS CANNOT LIE, BUT IT CAN GROW ..... D...   Nov 7 03, 02:56
- - Cybele   Good Morning Sir Knight Nice one Alan, I like i...   Nov 7 03, 03:19
- - JustDaniel   QUOTE (Dove @ Nov. 06 2003, 22:55)Just Daniel...   Nov 7 03, 06:11
- - JustDaniel   QUOTE (Cybele @ Nov. 07 2003, 02:19)Good Morn...   Nov 7 03, 06:25
- - JustDaniel   QUOTE (Cybele @ Nov. 06 2003, 09:08) Aah...   Nov 7 03, 06:45
- - Cybele   Hey Dan the Man QUOTE How many syllables in ...   Nov 7 03, 06:48
- - JustDaniel   QUOTE (Cybele @ Nov. 07 2003, 05:48)[b]Hey Da...   Nov 7 03, 07:01
- - Cybele   Feud? Sure!  VERY NIFTY Daniel Mew...   Nov 7 03, 07:35
- - JustDaniel   QUOTE (Cybele @ Nov. 07 2003, 06:35)Feud? Sur...   Nov 7 03, 08:09
- -   Dear Grace "Mew!! Cuss that dratted cat...   Nov 7 03, 08:16
- -   Ecthsthract from a dental epic-sode He mithed hit...   Nov 7 03, 08:22
- - JustDaniel   QUOTE (Alan @ Nov. 07 2003, 07:22)Ecthsthract...   Nov 7 03, 08:48
- -   Dear Daniel Ow weh ! Das tut weh ! FLOO...   Nov 7 03, 09:11
- - Cybele   Hey Alan Pork pies! Three cheers Alan Novoca...   Nov 7 03, 09:31
- -   WHAT ALES THEE, FALSTAFF ? Yer pie and yer chips ...   Nov 7 03, 09:46
- - Cybele   Tough one Alan,   QUOTE Yer pie and yer chips to...   Nov 7 03, 12:37
- -   Dear Grace Well modified ! WEAKER(MINDED) S...   Nov 7 03, 12:50
- -   MODAL'TY FORD Paint it "Any Color" Ford, Had ...   Nov 7 03, 20:16
- - Cybele   Well done Sir Knight Good riposte! A BIENT...   Nov 8 03, 00:10
- - JustDaniel   QUOTE (Cybele @ Nov. 07 2003, 23:10)Well done...   Nov 8 03, 07:38
- - Dove   QUOTE (Just Daniel @ Nov. 08 2003, 05:38)to a...   Nov 8 03, 17:29
- - JustDaniel   QUOTE (Dove @ Nov. 08 2003, 16:29) Turtle Rac...   Nov 8 03, 19:03
- - Cybele   Good morning Daniel   No Contest Life long ago ...   Nov 9 03, 01:26
- - JustDaniel   QUOTE (Cybele @ Nov. 09 2003, 00:26)Good morn...   Nov 9 03, 07:10
- - Cybele   QUOTE Good morning to you as well, fine Lady Grace...   Nov 9 03, 07:46
- - JustDaniel   Well, Grace... that is either quite a stretch... ...   Nov 10 03, 01:39
- - Cybele   QUOTE Well, Grace... that is either quite a stretc...   Nov 10 03, 02:34
- - JustDaniel   QUOTE (Cybele @ Nov. 10 2003, 01:34)QUOTE Wel...   Nov 11 03, 07:11
- - Cybele   Hi Daniel, Gladys is a girl's name - at least...   Nov 14 03, 07:30
- - JustDaniel   QUOTE (Cybele @ Nov. 14 2003, 06:30)Hi Daniel...   Nov 14 03, 08:06
- - Cybele   Hi Dan,  :wave: QUOTE Pain de guerre as wh...   Nov 14 03, 11:23
- - JustDaniel   QUOTE (Cybele @ Nov. 14 2003, 10:23)Hi Dan,  ...   Nov 14 03, 23:07
- - Cybele   Good Morning Dan,   QUOTE break-through Sweet f...   Nov 15 03, 00:24
- - JustDaniel   QUOTE (Cybele @ Nov. 14 2003, 23:24)Good Morn...   Nov 15 03, 04:36
- - Cybele   Aah Daniel ! My favourite film! too ...   Nov 15 03, 10:07
- - JustDaniel   QUOTE (Cybele @ Nov. 15 2003, 09:07)Aah Danie...   Nov 16 03, 02:50
- - Dove   QUOTE (Just Daniel @ Nov. 16 2003, 00:50)aren...   Nov 16 03, 03:27
- - Cybele   Love it    !! Good to meet you here again...   Nov 16 03, 04:06
- - JustDaniel   QUOTE (Cybele @ Nov. 16 2003, 03:06)Love it  ...   Nov 16 03, 06:29
- - Cybele   Hey there Dan,   Not English pronunciation, tryi...   Nov 16 03, 08:19
- - JustDaniel   QUOTE (Cybele @ Nov. 16 2003, 07:19)Hey there...   Nov 16 03, 17:55
- - Cybele   Good Morning Dan, dry ink well ‘s ink wanes as...   Nov 17 03, 02:26
- - JustDaniel   QUOTE (Cybele @ Nov. 17 2003, 01:26)Good Morn...   Nov 17 03, 07:00
- - Cybele   Hello Daniel, You will find cinquain in the di...   Nov 17 03, 07:38
- - JustDaniel   QUOTE (Cybele @ Nov. 17 2003, 06:38)Hello Dan...   Nov 17 03, 09:06
- - Dove   QUOTE (Just Daniel @ Nov. 17 2003, 07:06)Cup ...   Nov 18 03, 17:34
- -   Dear Dove Lovely ! As it happens, a zit can...   Nov 18 03, 17:56
- - Dove   what's vit cee?...some kind of overseas ointme...   Nov 18 03, 18:39
- -   Vitamin C ! I wanted it to be as near A Zit a...   Nov 18 03, 18:41
- - Cybele   Good Morning Sir Knight QUOTE As it happens, ...   Nov 19 03, 01:57
- -   Dear Grace Wasn't Daniel wot queried the Cee ...   Nov 19 03, 02:16
- - Cybele   Hi Alan, No, I realise that. I was referring to...   Nov 19 03, 03:54
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