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Mar 19 24, 10:26
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While sitting sub lime limbs could drop one on your head; time to make limeade It's a lot like lemonade except it's St Patrick's green
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Mar 29 24, 18:37
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It’s St. Patrick’s green some folks will wear every year but I’ve seldom seen a saloon or bar near here that will stock and serve green beer.
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Mar 30 24, 00:46
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socks to sieve green beer? did they take out the color or just stain stockings? are you an alcoholic or a very green drinker?
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Apr 6 24, 11:18
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Agreeing drinkers say beer is amber or brown. There are few thinkers who care what color they down as long as their problems drown.
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Apr 7 24, 08:22
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long to drown problems in a tankard of cold beer? it just doesn't work even though you may forget 'til you wake with hangover
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Apr 13 24, 23:31
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Hangover from wake to remember a good friend is a big mistake. That result you can amend for you’ve seen how it may end.
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Apr 14 24, 16:12
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saw how it would end and left the movie early; hate predictable date preferred predictable so she said it was our last
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Apr 22 24, 20:00
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She said it’s our last though the date was not complete. I was quite aghast but I tried to be discrete when I left her on the street.
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Apr 24 24, 07:49
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left her on the street after he ran over her; rushed from the scene poor mosquito will never take another bite of crime
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Apr 26 24, 09:51
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Take bites out of crime: prosecute perpetrators! We’re way past the time when liberal debaters are jailed with demonstrators.
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Apr 27 24, 03:37
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jailed demonstrators not having fun behind bars... even bartender said he prefers making drinks to creating uprisings
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May 3 24, 10:27
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Uprisings create chaos in any season; but to espouse hate is never a good reason. To me, it is just treason.
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May 4 24, 06:05
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there's no just reason to write a legal tanka ask any lawyer and he'll likely lie to you with a big smile on his face
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May 13 24, 09:32
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Big smiles on faces may not come from happiness. When pain embraces, you grit your teeth with duress. A rictus from death’s caress…
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May 13 24, 11:07
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Ricketts' death-caress is being felt frequently; who knows just how long he has left to write ditties that no one reads anyhow
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May 21 24, 08:32
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How anyone reads our ditties is beyond me. Dumb luck intercedes when folks search forums for free, they’ll find a smile or some glee.
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May 23 24, 05:42
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a smile or some glee we provide readers for free; who believes in free? should anyone even read they'd be looking for a catch
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Jun 1 24, 10:23
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Looking for a catch, we examined the offer to display each sketch from our muse’s vast coffer but critiques none will proffer.
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Jun 2 24, 15:07
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nary a critique has been offered for some years we write into wind being careful not to spit who'd want it splatting our face?
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Jun 8 24, 08:50
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Splatting our faces are all the tears we have cried because the traces of fellow poets have dried and this cannot be denied.
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