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Eisa
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This is a very original poem composed of different levels of mythology, spirituality and fantasy. I found it a very powerful poem.

This is posted in Seren's Synapse: Adonis in Dreamscape

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Adonis in Dreamscape

Somewhere--
where chimney smoke dots the distance
in synaptic gaps, like memory loss in warm rolling meadows, I tango

with the sun matching my every step.
Our growing heat--a fever un-indexed on any chart--
warms my neck as meadowlarks

sing warnings to intruders. I pause
in rehearsed mid-curve of a dip
to slip myself off; upside-down, the blue sky

becomes a cloudy skipping stone path
along a zen azure river bed.
Someone crosses that rarefied stream; meadowlarks

scatter and soar into those rapid currents to drown,
as the timothy grass above
bows and parts like hair yielding to watery eyes. He arrives

hunkered and stalking; the sun
returns to its rightful place; released,
I twist and fall onto my knees.

The wind offers burning incense:
cherry-wood and ripened blackberries
from the undergrowth of his kinky hair.

His indefatigable arms,
with sun-kissed skin, gather me up--
wildflowers bunched to his bare chest

in one motion; I stare at thin scars on his stomach
while his breath--
a Snowy Owl's stuttering wingtip-- brushes me.

My trembling fingers crawl inside his hands: hands
dewy and deathless as the Earth
that receives us all in our due turn.

We spin.

Where did you come from, O Beautiful One? The ancient capital
of Nineveh, by way of Lesbos and Sappho's revered verse,
only to descend into my arms...maybe...

pivoting, his dark myrrhic eyes betray his intentions,
and I feel my breasts heave and sigh, as our rush
blurs grass and sky,

until colours fracture, fall
and form iridescent steps to Aphrodite's throne. We ascend past the clouds;
I half expect feathers to tear from his back, during our dance.

We drift.

I kiss him before he condenses and falls like rain,
returning back to the soft ground.
His blood slowly coagulates into a bed of red roses

that are plucked
by young, barefoot maidens in flowing, virginal dresses
who have come far to worship our passing beauty.

I wake.

The sun bestows me red rows through my window in consolation;
I grin at those fresh flowers filling the kitchen vase,
while my husband, awake early, smiles coyly
and burns myrrh incense.


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- Eisa   April 2007 IBPC Nominations   Mar 3 07, 17:09
- - AMETHYST   Absolutely am smiling from ear to ear to see this ...   Mar 7 07, 01:12
- - Cleo_Serapis   Hiya Tim. In order to have this poem included in ...   Mar 20 07, 05:31
- - AMETHYST   I would like to nominate this poem located in Herm...   Mar 29 07, 07:35
- - AMETHYST   I would like to nominate this for its strong use o...   Mar 29 07, 07:42
- - AMETHYST   I would like to nominate this for the lovely senti...   Mar 29 07, 08:38
- - Cleo_Serapis   Thank you very much Liz! I appreciate and accept ...   Mar 30 07, 05:38
- - AMETHYST   I would like to nominate this poem. QUOTE On th...   Mar 30 07, 15:04
- - AMETHYST   I would love to nominate this poem. The Huitian Fo...   Mar 30 07, 15:45
- - Eisa   Thank you Liz Hugs Snow   Mar 30 07, 17:03
- - Cleo_Serapis   Congrats Snow - a lovely dance this is!   Mar 31 07, 06:34
- - AMETHYST   I would like to nominate this poem for its enchant...   Mar 31 07, 07:44
- - Cathy   Are you the original author of this poem? Yes Has...   Mar 31 07, 08:20
- - AMETHYST   Congratulations! Thanks Cathy ~ this is yet anothe...   Mar 31 07, 09:01
- - Eisa   I would like to nominate this very unique poem wri...   Mar 31 07, 19:53
- - Kathy   I am honoured by your nomination, Liz. Thank you....   Mar 31 07, 22:39
- - Kathy   Oh this one has been published too. But thank ...   Mar 31 07, 22:44
- - Kathy   Well nominated. :) I am very tired after several...   Apr 1 07, 00:26
- - Cleo_Serapis   Thanks Kathy for your reply. Yes, the IBPC will n...   Apr 1 07, 07:05
- - Cleo_Serapis   Thanks Kathy for letting us know - that's too bad,...   Apr 1 07, 07:08
- - Eisa   Oh Kathy! -- what a shame. I like this one so ...   Apr 2 07, 03:44
- - Eisa   I would like to nominate Treasures by Psyche (Sylv...   Apr 2 07, 04:23
- - Kathy   That's so nice of you! Thanks.   Apr 2 07, 04:23
- - AMETHYST   Hmmmmm ... Kathy I am both happy and sad. I am ver...   Apr 2 07, 15:37
- - AMETHYST   Thank you Snow for this wonderful surprise! :) I d...   Apr 2 07, 16:50
- - AMETHYST   Yes this is worthy of recognition... Hugs, Liz   Apr 2 07, 16:51
- - Kathy   See? I did come back. Nice one, Liz!   Apr 2 07, 18:42
- - Kathy   That's the trouble with getting things publish...   Apr 2 07, 18:46
- - Cleo_Serapis   Oh, I haven't had the pleasure to read or comment ...   Apr 3 07, 05:23
- - Psyche   Hi Snow! Thank you so much for nominating my p...   Apr 5 07, 10:29
- - Psyche   Thank you, Cleo, for your complimentary remarks. I...   Apr 5 07, 10:32
- - Psyche   Ah, I liked this one from the start, Liz! I...   Apr 5 07, 10:51
- - Psyche   An enchanting poem, Cathy! It has such a magic...   Apr 5 07, 11:02
- - Cleo_Serapis   Hi Aggie. I've updated this nomination with your ...   Apr 6 07, 05:16
- - Psyche   I would like to nominate Petra's Splendor, by ...   Apr 6 07, 13:46
- - AMETHYST   I love this poem. What an excellent choice Sylvia ...   Apr 6 07, 18:07
- - Aggiel   Thanks a lot, Liz and Lori. Aggie   Apr 6 07, 20:45
- - AMETHYST   No thanks necessary, your wonderful poem did it fo...   Apr 6 07, 22:50
- - AMETHYST   Thank you Kathy and Sylvia, I am liking this one t...   Apr 6 07, 22:51
- - AMETHYST   And the answer to that question powerfully allows ...   Apr 6 07, 22:53
- - Eisa   I would like to nominate this poem found in Seren...   Apr 7 07, 03:57
- - JaxMyth   Many thanks for the nomination but I have to decli...   Apr 9 07, 04:55
- - Cleo_Serapis   Oh bummer, well, no it's a GOOD reason to decline....   Apr 9 07, 05:33
- - AMETHYST   I would like to nominate this poem written by Snow...   Apr 13 07, 12:38
- - AMETHYST   Permission PM Sent WHoooo HOooooooo   Apr 13 07, 12:41
- - Eisa   Oh thanks for nominating this one Liz -- it is ver...   Apr 14 07, 04:47
- - Kathy   Well done, Liz. Let's have a party!   Apr 14 07, 05:05
- - AMETHYST   Permission Notice received and granted! YAHHHH ......   Apr 15 07, 13:11
- - Eisa   Hooray! I'm glad you've given permissi...   Apr 15 07, 15:04
- - azurepoetry   Hello All, I am off on vacation (NY) for a week, ...   Apr 22 07, 08:00
- - Cleo_Serapis   All set Tim! Enjoy your vacation - I hope the ret...   Apr 22 07, 16:57
- - Cleo_Serapis   Congratulations Snow! Best of luck in the IBPC c...   Apr 29 07, 08:04
- - Cleo_Serapis   Congratulations Cathy! Best of luck in the IBPC ...   Apr 29 07, 08:04
- - Cleo_Serapis   Congratulations Liz! Best of luck in the IBPC co...   Apr 29 07, 08:04
- - AMETHYST   Thanks Lori, I am so excited. Will you do the ho...   Apr 29 07, 18:20
- - AMETHYST   CONGRATULATIONS CATHY!!! Good Luck with IBPC I...   Apr 29 07, 18:24
- - AMETHYST   Congratulations Snow!!! This is going to turn h...   Apr 29 07, 18:28
- - Cleo_Serapis   LOL! No problem Liz - it should be easier 'cos I'l...   Apr 29 07, 18:28
- - Eisa   Whipee! I'm so glad I nominated this -- it...   Apr 30 07, 03:52
- - Eisa   Thank you both for your good wishes -- and thanks ...   Apr 30 07, 03:54
- - Eisa   Oh Cathy -- I'm so thrilled is going to IBPC -...   Apr 30 07, 03:57
- - Psyche   TRULY WONDERFUL, CATHY!!!! CONGRAT...   Apr 30 07, 12:12
- - Cathy   Thanks everyone! *smiles* Cathy   May 2 07, 07:44

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