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Jul 8 04, 06:54
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smooth ride by adding shocks but not the lightning kind (We have to explain such to Zeus) [ THUNDER ]
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Jul 8 04, 18:55
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Lightning, use to persuade, can't stand the heat, get out, really use it all for one's good, nice guy.
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Jul 10 04, 09:47
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nice sky
suddenly clouds
darkening the noonscape
when bright boy tosses out his rods
for light
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Jul 11 04, 06:52
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In lightI am refreshedand find my way with joyalong these winding paths: I'll takethis one!
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"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the RingsCollaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. KanterNominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here! "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner
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Jul 11 04, 14:43
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see it?
...how could we miss...
basking there in the sun
o'er the top of your bathing suit
bronzing
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Jul 11 04, 18:17
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Tanning, looking so good, pool people envious, some are snowbirds, back from the south, so light.
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Jul 11 04, 18:58
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so light a signal fire proclaiming tannerness for all the sallow world to see your dark
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Jul 12 04, 16:07
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Tex-Mex weather or not
day breaks with chile-ness warm tacos, refried beans but wonders what will fall upon t'male
Hey, how else could I make it two syllables?!
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Jul 13 04, 00:33
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heartburn? lay off the sauce... both kinds, fer that matter; when ya ain't shoshed, ya don' dribble o r
c h u m
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Jul 13 04, 05:20
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Or chum with very best: those who ignite your muse enjoy the benefit of praise always.
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"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the RingsCollaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. KanterNominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here! "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner
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Jul 13 04, 05:55
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oil weighs more than water so explain to me please why it floats on top of the pond will ya?
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Jul 13 04, 16:02
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Ya see, look, it's like this, viscosity, for sure, makes it easier for skimmers. No spill.
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Jul 13 04, 17:58
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nose spill
viscosity
can really bugger up
a fine spring afternoon when you
at-C H O 0 o o o !
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Jul 13 04, 18:19
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Choo Choo, not any more, heap big diesel engines, bigger faster,sleek, blow no smoke, Whistles.
In the far distance, remember.
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Jul 13 04, 19:17
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whistle as I blow smoke to cover up the fact I have no clue what I've just talked about
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Jul 13 04, 20:28
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would think that some would know that all it is is show; incredibly so many don't let on
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