Hi Cleo,
you raise a good question...
I prefer the direct action.
(And I would not personify it...)
I could say...
drifting cloud --
a beach umbrella
opens
But I like sounds, so I added the click, lol!
Thanks for your warm thoughts!
Hi Jan...
oh
of course...I never thought of that!
I hate the heat so much, that I use an
umbrella to protect from the sun, and we
don't get much rain during beach season.
But you've given this a different reading,
and that's just super!
(A haiku is only as valid as the reader makes it!)
Lary