Dear Dani
LOL ! - You'll see why below !
This is based on the fact that the title "IF" you will be aware, has been used before by Kipling, indeed, it was voted the most popular poem in the UK.
So, here is your stunning piece, with the last lines of Kipling's added :
If through the barreness -- 2 x n of my desert-like days I decide to just lie in the heat and melt away
perhaps you'd touch the goat skin to my lips, and give me life through the liquidity of your affection.
If I had foreseen but ashes of decayed life surrounding this piece of earth beneath me
you might have uncovered, under it all, a newborn stem fighting for life.
If I allow your fingers to caress me perchance they would shatter the starkness within.
If you were here I would know!
With a little help from the other "If", by Kipling :
And what's more, you'd be a man, my son .....
Dani, please excuse my irreverence, I LOVE your poem, but find it hard to stay un-impish, for long !
Love Alan
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