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 Dec 20 10, 12:51
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I was cut out of homes
I tried to make sweet Sweet as July orange juice in a Florida morning I left these houses like a man that knew adventure but really just collapsed in the devil's false embrace Now as I look into eyes that look back into mine Deep, and careful Like ocean's where the savagery of wildlife has faded back to Eden God glides into my homelessness and with every step I take I can feel the place he is preparing |
  
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Dec 21 10, 06:37
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 Mosaic Master  Posts: 18,892 Joined: 1-August 03 From: Massachusetts Member No.: 2 Real Name: Lori Kanter Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Imhotep |
Thank you for your Holiday entry, Daniel!
 Best of luck!  May the 'classic' holiday spirit be shared in your heart throughout the season!  ~ Mosaic Musings Staff         ·······  ·······"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the Rings
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