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First Place Eureka Springs by Jude Goodwin The WatersNow that’s a big Jesus and it’s not how I know him at all. Imagine living under someone’s father image like that, looks like he’s blocking the door. “I do this for you, my son.” Look mister, I’m hankering for East. I’ve done the Berlin Wall slab, the Liberty replica, time’s come for passing the great white milk carton. The real Jesus never grew old and he was skinny. I held him once, in college. I could feel his ribs. His heart hammered like a ruby-throated hummingbird, I felt the wind from his wings for years. This big theme park messiah, unrevolving and without an elevator, this isn’t Jesus. It’s his body guard. It’s the man blocking the tunnel down to the bomb shelters. It’s the guy who won’t let you into the ER to watch your mother die. It’s the cop who holds you back on the grass as your friends and ex-wife move all your belongings out of the house and into a cube van, it’s the shape you make on the cellar floor where you wait for the end. The real Jesus played guitar, bending his body around the music like a gourd. His skin was brown and smelled of cinnamon.Eureka Springs is a glorious re-envisioning of the famous 2 million pound mortar and steel statue of Jesus of the Ozarks. We're enamored of the way this poem takes the familiar image of Jesus, welcoming arms outstretched, and transforms the gesture to reveal our more earthly and unholy fathers, though in the end, returns the messiah to a humble and ultimately human figure. --Joseph Millar & Dorianne LauxSecond Place Snow by Judy Swann The WatersIt is a time that says enough, hush. If we’re lucky, no car will groan past into the glove of our silence. Though there are schools and businesses, we will not leave home. Though there is electricity stored in batteries and a power grid and running water, we lay modestly under our blankets. Though there are apples and kolatchen and bacon, though there is cabbage, we are not hungry.
Life holds still, like a painting or a mountain."Snow" is a small, quiet poem that becomes larger and larger as it progresses, climbing gracefully upwards into its final powerful image. We're especially taken with the syntax and simplicity of this piece. --Joseph Millar & Dorianne Laux Third Place Tiger, Tiger by Mitchell Geller Desert Moon Review(With profound apologies to William Blake)
Tiger, Tiger, driving right into the tree that fateful night; how indignant was thy spouse to send thee fleeing from thy house?
Charming children, winsome wife, fortune to enrich thy life. Can a trull, however sultry force thee into thine adult’ry?
In what distant bleak terrain hid what passes for thy brain? Did the itch within thy loins make thee pay for love with coins?
Hero of that long walk, spoiled, how didst thou become embroiled with these sluttish, venal sirens, so removed from tees and irons?
Art thou sinful? Art thou daft? Are the balls and wood and shaft that fill thy mind and heart and eyes not the ones that earn a prize?
Tiger! Tiger! See thy pastor, or a shrink, thy lust to master. In thy quest for venery did any bimbo NOT make thee?Who can resist this occasional poem about the great golf pro lately in the news for his flagrant peccadillos? A clever, deft, mini tour de force-- the informal language playing against rigors of form-- this is a quirky poem of questions that continues to surprise and delight. --Joseph Millar & Dorianne LauxHonorable Mentions
Wig by Michael Harty Wild Poetry ForumShe lay dead-white and perfect blanketed in paint and lilies. Incense died around our ankles. The hair, stiff with spray, too quiet to be her own. Never mind the little priest, what could he know of her falls and rises, of dime dances and lucky breaks, mink-wrapped evenings in Columbus Circle, New Year’s canapes on the Queen Mary. The shining lies of tuxedoed men, the dead faithlessness of diamonds. High life in the Loop, low life a block from Venice Beach. How to put twelve years of dents in the same Cadillac. How one enunciates while holding one’s fourth manhattan of the afternoon.
Yes, it was fate or serendipity when the late-arriving nephew staggered into the wreath from the Library Guild, knocking it into the coffin, which tipped the wig over her eyes and smeared her lipstick for the last time. Now that was more like it. Finally we could say goodbye.Takazumi by Bren Lyons criticalpoet.orgI sit awfully upright, silent in my Japanese room: tatami mats, the walls squared away the hanging scroll. Don’t forget the garbage, the wife trills out and the door clicks shut: she is away to work. I pull out the shining sword and lay it upon my lap, sharp as a bastard, you could shave with this fucker. Breathe in, breathe out, become Japanese. I stare at the scroll, trying to make out the Kanji, this looks like “world” and “within” and then there’s a load of squiggly pigeonshit and then the sirens kick in, the ambulances, dragging heartsore victims to clapped-out hospitals. I stare some more at the scroll. Stare long enough and you might learn something. I like this summer kimono, it allows you to scratch your balls comfortably, no need for zips or retainers and the squirrels, they run about in the trees, beyond the window, they run about in the piece of the wood where we had to bury poor fuckin Paul. They haven’t found him yet; chances are they never will. The good thing about this room is that it has no mirrors. I mean to say, you don’t need to look at yourself. Ever.Post Apocalypse in Polo Park by Don Schaeffer Pen ShellsThe end of the world comes with a grumble and small fires licking at the trees;
but the people die at the hands of one another. The cold comes from failure of mercy, not the winter.
That’s why the bus trip home is magnified. Those icey lights which subtract the color and the deep Winter panic of the Winnipeg cold.
I’m a deeply lonely man so I just understand. I want the voice of a friend in the night.
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"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the RingsCollaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. KanterNominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here! "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner
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Mosaic Master
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First Place Giant Cockroaches by Mignon Ledgard The Writers BlockI still cry dead leaves yet leave open one day of the week for those who drop by unannounced.
Sweepers brush the streets all night long. I close my eyes, let them stroke my hair while sleep filters through coils of Paradise boxspring and mattress.
The next one will be a hammock under a rubber tree with shiny green ant-boats that float me in waterdreams.
Oh the water—hold me in cold Lima. Oregano tongue. Quivers.
Then come back tomorrow just don’t forget your suede jacket on my leather sofa.
You do not believe in shamans but witchcraft casts its veil around your bed in the Amazon.
You fall into the fog of Lima, this rising cement city against mosquito heaven, black lizards, overgrown egrets with freshwater shrimp in their beak.
You wake and forget each night’s fear—
giant roaches gone, it is always fun to hear the conquest of paranoia, one night at a time. It reminds me of how I get through each wild and boisterous day.A musical mind at work. Vivid language, unexpected turns, the manmade colliding with the natural. A beautiful poem. --Paul LisickySecond Place A New Cartography by Mandy Pannett The Write IdeaIt is dark by the river, by this bridge’s underbelly: struts intertwine, cross-hatch. He feels insignificant; small: an ant within a clod of grass.
The bridge is singing a cappella – voices of women shift in its iron: a Celtic lament of the lowlands, drowning, an elegy, death.
He wears a bracelet-like device, for this is a sentient city. A new cartography measures his skin, the contours and spikes of his nerves.
He wonders why the chart of him should always be so flat: no troughs, no peaks, no lines of joy – once he stopped to hear a song: a blackbird in a tree. The graph recorded gentle frills at this.
Let them keep it all, he thinks, their precious watchtowers on a wrist. Let them analyse the heart of man.
The bridge still croons its ballads out, its chords of broken love. He thinks about the note he’s left and hopes it hurts her, hopes she drowns in guilt.
‘Now it’s bound to peak,’ he says. A pigeon watches at the water’s edge.I love this poem's sense of swing, its richness of language. And the delicate force of its central metaphor. --Paul LisickyThird Place Run by Cynthia Neely Desert Moon ReviewYou were eight when Rain-dog died; we buried him high up on the hill where pine trees sigh and sing in the rain. When you got married? that baby? did it die? you ask, Will I
be buried there too? And my words still clot, then jumble out, tumbled like scrabble tiles. Today you are twenty and I am not any closer to explaining things; miles
between us, miles and wings. You say, I’m fine But I recall a day when you were five. I held your hand (then, you still wanted mine) and that dumb dog stuck his snout in a hive
of yellow jackets. Your laces were undone. Even then, I could only holler, Run!Memory and bewilderment: so much life compressed in these four stanzas. ----Paul Lisicky
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"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the RingsCollaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. KanterNominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here! "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner
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