Alan, The title threw me, I was expecting yet another homage to the season of Spring. I was pleasantly surprised.
Very succinct, but this doesn't need a lot of additional flourish. It's to the point.
I keep reading your last line over and over and that one just doesn't seem to hold up as well as the others, although it is the one that brings it all to a shattering conclusion. I have to ponder it some more.
I am wondering if the word "Paris" was the one key word that ignited your creative fire for the broken leg theme?
JLY
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Give thanks for your new friends of today, but never forget the warm hugs of your yesterdays.
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