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  Dec 14 07, 21:43
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 Assyrian  Posts: 181 Joined: 13-September 07 From: Conway, Arkansas Member No.: 468 Real Name: Pamela Writer of: Poetry Referred By:self  |
COME DO THE CHRISTMAS DANCE WITH ME! By Pami Jane Tennant 12/14/07 MAY I HAVE THE PLEASURE OF THIS DANCE? SHAKE YOUR TUSHY, THROW YOUR HANDS HIGH ROCK AND ROLL, SAMBA, LIFT YOUR FEET AND PRANCE! GIVE A GIGGLE WITH YOUR JIGGLE, SMILE AND SIGH... LET YOUR JOY IN THE SPIRIT FLY HIGH IN THE SKY! DANCE WITH CYMBALS AND BERIBBONED TAMBOURINES LIFT HEARTS AND VOICES IN PRAISE FOR THE ANCIENT OF DAYS FOR THE GIFT OF REJOICING IN HIS AWESOME SCHEMES GIVING US HIS ONLY SON WITH HIS LOVE AND MERCIFUL WAYS TO FORGIVE AND SAVE US WITH HIS LIFE, OH LET US PRAISE! DANCING IN JOY AND SINGING HIS PRAISE IN SWEET LOVE IS PLEASING TO HE THAT SACRIFICED SO MUCH FOR MANKIND ALL HE WANTS IS OUR LOVE, OUR ALMIGHTY FATHER ABOVE SO COME LET US ADORE HIM, WITH ALL OUR MIGHT AND MIND GIVE HIM YOUR ALL AND LEAVE EVERYTHING ELSE BEHIND! MERRY CHRISTMAS FATHER GOD, AND HAPPY BIRTHDAY MY LORD JESUS! WHENEVER IT WAS IN OUR HISTORY MY GIFT TO YOU IS MY LOVE AND MYSELF IN EVERY WAY I SING OF YOUR GREAT LOVE, YOUR POWER AND GLORY AND EVERY CHANCE I'M GIVEN I LOVE TO TELL YOUR STORY! ·······  ·······A relaxed attitude, and a heart of gratitude, increases life whilst joy doth exude! <:))))><
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Dec 15 07, 10:21
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 Ornate Oracle Posts: 2,085 Joined: 24-May 04 From: Time, Immoral Member No.: 66 Writer of: Poetry |
Hello LP,
I have this thing about centering - leave it to Carlton Cards. Otherwise, I'm getting my dancing flippers on. Merlin ps - Happy Birthday, too. ······· ······· |
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Dec 15 07, 11:06
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 Creative Chieftain Posts: 600 Joined: 14-April 07 From: Texas Hill Country Member No.: 420 Real Name: Mary Boren Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Kathy Earsman |
And I have this other thing about all caps. I'm having trouble getting past the formatting enough to offer critique. Let your words speak for themselves, Pami -- you don't have to dress them up in buttons and bows.
Merry Christmas. Mary ······· ·······Mary Sullivan Boren
Connecting ... Even Yet "There is in all things - a hidden wholeness." -Thomas Merton MM Award Winner      |
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Dec 16 07, 12:52
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Assyrian Posts: 181 Joined: 13-September 07 From: Conway, Arkansas Member No.: 468 Real Name: Pamela Writer of: Poetry Referred By:self |
 LOLOL whatever it takes...just dance away!Oh, and thank YOU! 47 yesterday...whoopee! I made this far...I can make it all the way!  Hugs, Pami xoxox ······· ·······A relaxed attitude, and a heart of gratitude, increases life whilst joy doth exude! <:))))><
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Dec 16 07, 12:54
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Assyrian Posts: 181 Joined: 13-September 07 From: Conway, Arkansas Member No.: 468 Real Name: Pamela Writer of: Poetry Referred By:self |
I'm so sorry Mary, it just so happens that both my bi carpal tunnel syndrome and my fibromyalgia were killing me when I wrote this...so it was one or the other...beg pardon.
Thanks for the crit. Pami xoxo ······· ·······A relaxed attitude, and a heart of gratitude, increases life whilst joy doth exude! <:))))><
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Dec 16 07, 13:16
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 Creative Chieftain Posts: 544 Joined: 3-May 07 From: Central Florida Member No.: 427 Real Name: Judith Labriola Writer of: Poetry |
Hi Pami...
I wondered where you were...glad to see you back...I am in the middle of a lot of things...my daughter has been ill, and we are getting adjusted to that, plus I bought a condo in the same area I am living in now..Plus, waiting to pack everything until after Christmas and also having company for a week...no time to post lately. I am dancing in spirit with you...it would be just as powerful without the caps, but either way it is a joyous dance. ((((hugs))))) Judi ······· ······· |
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Dec 18 07, 08:46
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Creative Chieftain Posts: 600 Joined: 14-April 07 From: Texas Hill Country Member No.: 420 Real Name: Mary Boren Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Kathy Earsman |
No apology necessary, Pami. Your poem, your choice. I hope you're feeling better.
Mary ······· ·······Mary Sullivan Boren
Connecting ... Even Yet "There is in all things - a hidden wholeness." -Thomas Merton MM Award Winner |
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Jan 13 08, 11:00
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 Ornate Oracle  Posts: 8,888 Joined: 27-August 04 From: Bariloche, Argentine Patagonia Member No.: 78 Real Name: Sylvia Evelyn Maclagan Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:David Ting |
Hi Pami!
I waited until our southern hemisphere heatwave gave us a breather, to get back to MM. I'm all melted, and you guys are all frozen...haha... Jolly poem, can't keep my feet still, even tho' I also have FM. I agree with the others about the centering and caps, but never mind, diversity in poetry is as important as in Nature. Keep 'em coming, Pami dear!! Hugs, Sylvia ······· ·······Mis temas favoritos
The Lord replied, my precious, precious child, I love you and I would never leave you. During your times of trial and suffering, when you see only one set of footprints, it was then that I carried you. "There is no life higher than the grasstops Or the hearts of sheep, and the wind Pours by like destiny, bending Everything in one direction." Sylvia Plath, Crossing the Water, Wuthering Heights. Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here! MM Award Winner          |
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Jan 24 08, 10:23
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Glad you made it through forty-seven. Something to dance and sing about. Watch out for the last ten percent.
Don 
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Jan 24 08, 10:46
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 Assyrian Posts: 160 Joined: 12-July 07 From: South Africa Member No.: 451 Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Alan M Douglas |
Hi Pami,
Just want to say I enjoyed the poem.....it certainly got my feet all tingly and wanting to dance! Hugs, M ······· ······· |
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