Jeanne, First let me say welcome to MM, I hope you will find a home here as I and others have. I liked you poem, a little simplistic in its idea and form, but it does flow very smooth and I like seagulls, and terns, actually most birds. Don't let me discourage you please keep posting, and we will keep reading. I am not here often due to poor health, but I do try to stay in touch.
Take care Steve
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