 I'm A Hamburger Bun (Episode # 1), From A Humor Challenge to a saga..... |
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 Sep 5 04, 19:04
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 Babylonian  Posts: 80 Joined: 3-August 04 From: Richfield, Utah Member No.: 74 Writer of: Poetry  |
Beef, beef, I don't know.........
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Sep 5 04, 20:06
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Once again, you live up to your quick-draw name. I'll look for the Angus in Episode #2.
David :) |
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Sep 5 04, 20:44
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Babylonian Posts: 80 Joined: 3-August 04 From: Richfield, Utah Member No.: 74 Writer of: Poetry |
Thanks Tao
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Sep 4 04, 19:23
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 Mosaic Master  Posts: 18,892 Joined: 1-August 03 From: Massachusetts Member No.: 2 Real Name: Lori Kanter Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Imhotep |
 Jim!Thanks for this cute jingle! Made my night! ~Cleo 
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Sep 4 04, 22:00
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Babylonian Posts: 80 Joined: 3-August 04 From: Richfield, Utah Member No.: 74 Writer of: Poetry |
Thanks Cleo, glad you got a kick out of this. Part #2 is posted too.
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Aug 15 04, 01:39
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Babylonian Posts: 80 Joined: 3-August 04 From: Richfield, Utah Member No.: 74 Writer of: Poetry |
I'm a hamburger bun, can't you see,
I mean, who wouldn't want to be me? I rise in the morning because of the yeast, I'm soft and fresh, to say the least. Just like most humans, I have two sides, In Wonder's truck, I get to take rides. I contain substance within, that's the meat, I'm one who will never admit to defeat. Ketchup and mustard add color to my life, occasionally I grow in numbers due to a knife. I could be cut into quarters, or just in half, to go beyond that would just be a laugh. I can't complain, I never have any bills, and of course I don't come down with ills. I guess there would just be one little catch, if I wind up at Burger King, it's down someone's hatch.... ······· ·······Jim AKA Rapid-Fire Publisher/Editor of WRITE ON!! Poetry Magazette
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Sep 5 04, 12:34
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Hi Jim,
While this is great for laughs, you have messages baked in! Just like most humans, I have two sides, - if only we were so simple! I could be cut into quarters, or just in half, to go beyond that would just be a laugh. - no offense to sliced bread? I did a similar personification on books, though less humorous, in my Overdue posted in Homer's. Okay, I'll bite, where's the beef?  David |
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