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 Nov 12 04, 11:26
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Please change the title on this poem...Thank you!
Snowflake Sashay Snowflakes perform delicately, sway aimless on gentle breeze. Glitter like tiny prisms, captured by sunlight freeze. Gusts of wind quickly arouse lacy flakes to dancing artists. A picturesque panaroma of whirlwind arabesques... They're rhythm is a-dazzle in the brightest light of day. A wild glistening interlude, embraced by misty ray. Snowflakes swirl in chasse, next moment, glide glissade. Change in breeze determines tempo as they continue to sashay. Slowed to waltz from yesteryear, winds fade to calming sigh; a-float on brisk, wintery air they softly shimmer and shine. copyright Nov2004 Cathy Bollhoefer |
  
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Nov 12 04, 12:15
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 Mosaic Master  Posts: 18,892 Joined: 1-August 03 From: Massachusetts Member No.: 2 Real Name: Lori Kanter Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Imhotep |
Thank you for your Holiday entry! :holly:
Best of luck to you! :dove: May the 'classic' holiday spirit be shared in your heart throughout the season! :blueorn: ~ Mosaic Musings Staff :knight: :pharoah: :viking: :vic: :tut: :vic: :cali: :knight: ·······  ·······"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the Rings
Collaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. Kanter Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here!  "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner           |
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Nov 13 04, 08:30
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 Laureate Legionnaire  Posts: 1,250 Joined: 2-August 03 From: USA Member No.: 7 Writer of: Poetry |
Hello Larrysgirl~
 This is a delightful and "icy" poem filled with superb imagery! Good luck~ Lindi ······· ·······"Imagination is more important than knowledge and encircles the world"
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| Guest_Cathy_* |
Nov 13 04, 09:58
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Thank you!
I'm glad you enjoyed the poem! :snowflake: Cathy :snowflake: :snowflake:
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Sep 30 05, 05:33
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Mosaic Master Posts: 18,892 Joined: 1-August 03 From: Massachusetts Member No.: 2 Real Name: Lori Kanter Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Imhotep |
Permission granted for MMHC chapbook compilation
······· ·······"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the Rings
Collaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. Kanter Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here! "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner |
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