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In the Villanelle, the first five stanzas are triplets (or tercets), and the last stanza is a quatrain such that the rhyme scheme is as follows: "aba aba aba aba aba abaa." Thus a Villanelle has 19 lines. The 1st and 3rd lines from the first stanza are alternately repeated such that the 1st line becomes the last line in the second stanza, and the 3rd line becomes the last line in the third stanza. The last two lines of the poem are lines 1 and 3 respectively, making a rhymed couplet. There are only two rhymes in the usual villanelle, placed strategically in the poem. A villanelle needs no particular meter or line length.

One of the most noted of these that is a splendid example is one by Dylan Thomas, "Do Not Go Gentle Into That Good Night."

Do not go gentle into that good night,
Old age should burn and rave at close of day;
Rage, rage against the dying of the light!

Though wise men at their end know dark is right,
Because their words had forked no lightning they
Do not go gentle into that good night.

Good men, the last wave by, crying how bright
Their frail deeds might have danced in a green bay,
Rage, rage against the dying of the light!

Wild men who caught and sang the sun in flight,
And learn, too late, they grieved it on its way,
Do not go gentle into that good night.

Grave men, near death, who see with blinding sight
Blind eyes could blaze like meteors and be gay,
Rage, rage against the dying of the light!

And you, my father, there on the sad height,
Curse me, bless me, now with your fierce tears, I pray.
Do not go gentle into that good night.
Rage, rage against the dying of the light!






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- Cleo_Serapis   Villanelle   Aug 20 03, 06:14
- - JustDaniel   Well, I sure ain't no Dylan Thomas, but here...   Oct 27 03, 07:16
- - Athena   Hi Daniel,   Please forgive my multiple months ...   Jan 31 04, 04:05
- -   Dear Daniel Very nice ! Dear Dolly, I know ...   Jan 31 04, 05:46
- - Athena   Thank you so much, Alan!  That's really sw...   Jan 31 04, 06:18
- -   Dear Dolly Since you say you don't have time ...   Jan 31 04, 16:38
- - Don   Commenting upon IF ONLY I COULD CLEAR MY MIND ghos...   Feb 5 04, 12:49
- -   Dear All, As I wite new, or stumble upon older vi...   Mar 13 04, 07:36
- - heartsong7   Encounter It was the most God awful ugly cat and ...   Jul 17 04, 20:14
- - JustDaniel   This one awaits critique in the the crit forums......   Jul 18 04, 02:44
- - Cathy   I'm not real good at this but here goes! ...   Nov 11 04, 12:15
- - JustDaniel   I'm not a Villain 'ell, I'm Just Vanil...   Apr 13 05, 02:16
- - JustDaniel   [ I'm offering this one for Don.  It's a r...   Apr 15 05, 16:34
- - Don   Toying with a Villanelle By Just Daniel for discu...   Apr 16 05, 19:37
- - JustDaniel   Hmmm... Did you enjoy it?  or was it just work, Do...   Apr 17 05, 05:22
- - Don   Hi Daniel, Though a lot of work, due to code tran...   Apr 17 05, 07:49
- - JustDaniel   I'll look forward to it, Don.  There's no ...   Apr 17 05, 12:01
- - jgdittier   Dear All, I am slowly getting the lay of the land....   Apr 28 05, 09:40
- - Don   Hi jgdittier, Your presence, among a few others, ...   Apr 28 05, 10:35
- - AMETHYST   Temptation's Time--Villanelle #2... Why steer a...   Oct 31 05, 12:28
- - Maxim   I tried this form after coming across it a year or...   Nov 1 05, 12:56
- - AMETHYST   Hello Maxim, You've met this form with a master...   Nov 5 05, 14:25
- - JustDaniel   Since there is a villanelle posted in the critique...   Nov 21 15, 03:25
- - Larry   Hi Daniel, Loved it and will try to write somethi...   Nov 22 15, 17:45
- - Larry   Reflections When youth was just a blush upon my c...   Dec 11 15, 10:12
- - JustDaniel   Good grief, Larry!!! Except for the a...   Dec 11 15, 11:08
- - Larry   Hi Daniel, Thanks for stopping by. I guess great...   Dec 11 15, 18:08

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