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 Jan 28 09, 23:20
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Opposites Attract
Does warmth ever make you cold? Does fear ever make you bold? They say opposites attract and on each other react just like spores and food make mold! Peggy Carpenter Harwood ·······  ······· |
  
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Jan 15 10, 08:49
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Greek Posts: 698 Joined: 29-May 06 From: US East Coast Member No.: 185 Real Name: Peggy Harwood Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:just wandered in |
Hi Mustafa,
Welcome to Mosaic Musings!!! Thank you for reading my submission and for commenting !!! I'm glad you like my idea. We do call this kind of thing a poem because it has a rhyme scheme and meter. It is similar to a kind of poem called a "limerick" because of its rhyme scheme. A limerick has the rhyme scheme of A,A,B,B, A and this poem does as well. It is different from a limerick in one way as well: A true limerick has a 9,9,5,5,9 meter but this has a 7,7,7,7,7 meter. Peggy ······· ······· |
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Peggy Carpenter Harwood Opposites Attract Jan 28 09, 23:20 
prerna bala QUOTE (Peggy Carpenter Harwood @ Jan 29 09, 0... Jan 29 09, 15:39 Peggy Carpenter Harwood Hi PB,
I chose to use present tense verbs rather ... Jan 29 09, 16:20 ohsteve Peggy, This does not strike me as a limerick, firs... Jan 29 09, 20:32 Peggy Carpenter Harwood Thanks Steve!! I'll just re-label it... Jan 29 09, 20:43 Mostafa Youssef I liked the idea, I will not call it as a poem or ... Jan 13 10, 17:49 Thoth Hi Peggy,
I liked the idea of this one, especiall... Jan 16 10, 12:52 Peggy Carpenter Harwood Hi Wally,
Sorry I took so long to get back to you... Feb 15 10, 10:33 4rum I do like limericks and when I took the time to re... Mar 31 10, 09:18 
Peggy Carpenter Harwood Hi rum,
I like your handle! Rum is quite a f... Mar 31 10, 10:41 1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
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