Portals of Love Options

[Guest_Zeus²_*]

 
Portals of Love

Flick of the tongue in your ear
cutaneous sensation of moist lips,
light kiss on the neck
firm but gentle embrace.

Tempting glance of the eyes
not so hidden body language,
a smile of exotic content
just holding hands.

Are there words of love
a silent understanding,
feeling possessive, your mind
full of romantic thoughts.

Passionate arousal
breathless, non stop
infinite desire,
eager to be submissive.

Pheromones stimulating decisions
casting off garments,
willing, quenching attraction
seduction in place.

amorous, affectionate, adoration
enamored, captivated:
love story in the making,
uncontrolled gratification.

Eros fulfilled
body – mind - soul detached,
emptiness; ethereal;  yet complete.

Paradise is for mortals.


[ Did our distant cousins the
primates, ever think like this?]

suggest you listen on a CD to the  BACCHANALE
from Samson and Delilah by St. Saens while
reading this.

[Guest_Jox_*]

Hi Z2,

I enjoyed this (despite not having the music to play).

I thought it slowed and raced at about the right places and the word choice was good (though "pheromones" did jar a little - accurate though it might be).

I was amused by your omnipotent footnote.. Very Zeus!

I have no useful advice at all (well, maybe other than might you consider ditching "pheromones"? But, then, again, it does fit in. It's just the sound that seems unfortunate).

So jolly spiffing my Deity.

I shall bow out for now!

Yours, James.

[Guest__*]

Didn't have Samson and Delilah by St. Saens so I settled for Ravel's Bolero.
It was equally good at accentuating erotic alliteration.

One question.

What have you been on ?

I only ask because I want some. :costume:

A

[Guest_Zeus²_*]

James,
liked your jovial reply. Ah, that question of pheromones, I did look for alternate words, but they all lead back to what the body secretes, be it animal or human.

Also any good mood music would have sufficed.
Thanks for looking in.
Z man/Larry

[Guest_Zeus²_*]

Aken,
you could have substituted any Sinatra slow ballad to help get you in the mood.
Now to answer your question about "what I have been on" hmmmmmm.
that's a trade secret " For lovers only" and is available just about anywhere.
Thanks for looking in and your comments.
Larry the Z man

[Arnfinn]

Hmmmmmmmmmmmm...........This poem is Hot.Hot.HOT.. HOTT  :devil:  :devil:

Hey!...Larry........Mate....C'm On!....Close the door will ya.  :laugh:


Yeah!.....Nice deviation.......Larry.


Arnie  :troy: