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Dec 19 03, 20:09
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Mosaic Master
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I just love the old classic Twilight Zone episodes! To honor the clever writers and creator, Rod Serling, I am going to list out several episode titles. Your job: Create a piece using a minimum of 8 titles. Have fun and be open to stories and prose too (you poets you)! Cheers! ~Cleo P.S. Of COURSE, I'm listing my personal favorites too! The Arrival The Shelter The Passerby It's a Good Life To Serve Man Little Girl Lost The Little People The Gift In His Image Valley of the Shadow No Time Like the Past The New Exhibit On Thursday We Leave For Home A Thing About Machines The Eye of the Beholder The Mind and the Matter The Monsters are Due on Maple Street Queen of the Nile The Masks I am the Night - Color Me Black Sounds and Silences Caesar and Me Stopover in a Quiet Town The Encounter Come Wander with Me GOOD LUCK!
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"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the RingsCollaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. KanterNominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here! "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner
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Dec 20 03, 20:08
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Just Leaving
On Thursday we leave for home, a stopover in a quiet town we lived in the valley of the shadows just the two of us Caesar and me.
One curiosity about that place one had to worry about the encounter always a question of the mind and the matter there was this problem of the masks and a thing about machines.
As usual, the passerby who was indebted to the little people, whose endless sounds and silences wailing about the new exhibit, never ceased.
He would emerge from the shelter, timing the arrival just as the monsters are due on Maple street. Would approach the both of us…muttering.. come wander with me.
His famous line.. “I am the night- color me black” here to serve man and all who come with the gift I possess, It’s a good life.
Even that little girl lost, who thinks she is queen of the nile sees me in the eye of the beholder whispering, no time like the past for us all to meet.
After all, it was.. in his image he portrayed us all the doppelganger... from the other side..
“There is a fifth dimension, beyond that which is known to man. It is a dimension as vast as space and as timeless as infinity. It is the middle ground between light and shadow, between science and superstition”. Rod Serling
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Dec 21 03, 08:29
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Mosaic Master
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Very impressive Lar!
I like how you wove this one together!
Cool! Thanks for participating! ~Cleo
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"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the RingsCollaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. KanterNominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here! "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner
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Dec 22 03, 04:38
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Cleo / Zeus2!
Now I understand your posting of this poem in the crit forum!
I'd never heard of Rod Serling before.
Though, donkey's years ago (1970s-80s) I think that a monochrome series of "The Twilight Zone" was screened on British tv late at night - I think I even saw a couple. Spooky electronic music?? Focused on the supernatural?? A sort of "X-Files" without the torches-in-the-dark routine every two minutes?
James.
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Dec 22 03, 20:47
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Dear Cleo
Us Brits have never been able to take the Twilight Zone seriously because of Twiglets. These were/are a knobbly cheese-stck without sheese, like pretzel sticks, and they produced an ad :
"You are about to enter .....
The Twiglet Zone",
with various extensions. Very clever (mis-)use of the TZ appearance and starting theme.
Love Alan
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Dec 22 03, 21:36
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Tonight on The Twiglet Zone:
The 1970s party from Hell. Watch in horror as proceedings are invaded by massive cheese squares doing unspeakable things with pineapple chunks. See how, from nowhere, they are mercilessly skewered! Munch your way through prawns in lettuce (not scary enough?) Then add “Marie Rose” sauce; the world’s most disgusting thing that can be concocted from mayonnaise and tomato ketchup. Yes, the Invasion of The Prawn Cocktails!
Watch as piles of innocent food are incarcerated in sad-coloured “Tupperwear” boxes. Cry as the corners curl-up, resisting every attempt to make a seal.
Then! If you can stand any more - the Twiglets arrive. (Cue Vikings singling “Spam, Spam, Wonderful Spam! (Surely shome mistake - this is the 1940s isn’t it?)
This is The Twiglet Zone.
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Dec 23 03, 07:29
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Thanks Larry,
I can hardly contain(er) myself!
Cheers, James.
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Dec 28 03, 20:11
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Mosaic Master
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Off Course
“Prominent sounds and silences are just a game of the mind.”
That’s what I’ve been told a million times. It could even be a zillion times. Frankly, I’ve lost track now in the waning days of the mind and the matter. You see, in the days of my youth, just about everything that entered my mind mattered. Things change, but there’s still no time like the past.
My family and I took a trip to see the Queen of the Nile many moons ago. Being a scribe of many voices, we were summoned to the gift of the masks – a festival that honored those in the queen’s favor. The encounter I shall never forget.
As we passed though the valley of the shadow, the eye of the beholder could be felt, but not seen. I shivered as we picked up our pace. “Come now, little ones, let’s not make the arrival to the kingdom of our Pharaoh a late one,” I said as I wrapped my leathery arm around my two youngest and continued to step up the pace of our journey. “What would Pharaoh’s Queen say if we were not there to accept this honor?”
I recall now the writings that were scribed on obelisks of the finest limestone coverings on the new exhibit. Our namesake had been etched in a cartouche ever present in the eye of Ra. Beneath; a hieroglyphic representation of “To Serve Man” made a remarkable statement.
What am I thinking of? I hear a voice calling me now. It calls to me with a swift and steady hand.
“Come wander with me,” over and over in my mind.
What is that? “Why do you wish us to veer off course?” I asked the silence.
“Come wander with me.”
My problem, being a student of habit and all, is that I NEVER veer off course. Until today, when I looked to the West, and in His image, I saw a light that shone so brightly, I could only oblige the voices. “I will take this path today,” I pointed and then vanished into the earth. "My journey is complete."
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"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the RingsCollaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. KanterNominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here! "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner
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Dec 28 03, 20:37
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Jolly good show, Cleo.
Only thing is... could we please have our path back, else we'll be stuck here for eternity - and that is such a long Thyme that it would drawf Rosemarie!
Mind you... that would be sufficient herbs to go with all the items in the Twiglet Zone.
Good to see the word "zillion" making a guest appearance. It should be in every MM posting.
Toodle Pip,
James.
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Dec 29 03, 09:11
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Mosaic Master
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Thank you James (the doorman enters)...
Do you know what the exhibit is?
Which way did he go? Doooh!
Thanks for stopping in - lavender fields await with a ZILLION scents to be tantilized with!
Cheers! ~Cleo
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"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the RingsCollaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. KanterNominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here! "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner
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Dec 29 03, 12:07
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Hi Cleo,
No, I've no idea what the exhibit is, save what you've told us. I've never seen a complete episode of "The Twilight Zone" (I think they stopped televising them here in the early 1970s?). The spooky music and the murky monochrome picture was enough for me... I was off to do some homework. (When I say "homework" I might exagerate!)
So, what was being exhibited?
James.
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Dec 29 03, 16:42
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Mosaic Master
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His grave silly!
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"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the RingsCollaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. KanterNominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here! "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner
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Dec 29 03, 18:18
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Grave Matter by MB
It's a fortunate man Who goes to his grave, After a long life-span And a soul fully saved.
He melds with the clay That gave him his life As his flesh rots away To the sound of a fife.
His life-energy sapped Lifted, then swiftly flown: Taken from the mapped To dimensions unknown.
NB: This poem remains in copyright for well over a century (one hopes).
James.
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Dec 30 03, 06:18
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Mosaic Master
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Excellent poem MB!
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"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the RingsCollaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. KanterNominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here! "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner
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Dec 30 03, 07:15
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Cleo...
Maxine has asked me to convey her thanks for your kind comment.
James.
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Dec 31 03, 09:03
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Mosaic Master
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Oh GOODIE!
Today, our U.S. tv channel 'SCI-FI', is playing an all day marathon of non other - TWILIGHT ZONE!
WHIPPEEEEEEEEEE!
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"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the RingsCollaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. KanterNominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here! "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner
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Dec 31 03, 09:47
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Cleo,
Those programmes still exist on VT? Amazing. Here many ancient television programmes were wiped for reasons both of space (!) and re-using the silver in them. Well, have fun taping them - don’t go watching television in the daytime will you; too few hours of light as it is at this time of year. Just off to the woods for a walk before the last daylight of the year is destroyed.
Did you see the New Year firework celebrations in Sydney Harbour? Most spectacular. (Ok I did see tv - but just a brief news bulletin).
Was The Twiglet Zone really that good? I thought that Torches In The Dark was far better and I soon tired of that. (But I am a devoted Trekkie! - Original and NG only; no other spin-offs).
Have fun with the hours of VT you’ll record.
And a Happy New 2004 to you and everyone - don’t forget it’s already arrived on Earth; many of us are simply rather late to join it!
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Dec 31 03, 09:54
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Mosaic Master
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Happy New Year to you and all on MM as well. We're off to see LOTR again right now - so enjoy your day and evening!
HUGS! Lori
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"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the RingsCollaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. KanterNominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here! "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner
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Nov 13 08, 06:44
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Mosaic Master
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"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the RingsCollaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. KanterNominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here! "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner
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