Hello Jim.
! This is really very good and the punch line, OMG!
I admire anyone who can not only write a sonnet with such ease, but to format it in a set meter AND add the comedic element at the close (what is the proper term please for the closing), bravo!
I have just two suggestions actually, and only because of the use of the word 'smile' three times in this piece. Please take or toss the suggestions as you wish.
Will be back to read this one again. Movie comes out next Friday - can't wait!
Cheers.
~Cleo
La Gioconda’s enigmatic smile
has puzzled critics from the first review
for none could grasp her air of playful guile.
Solid opening - makes me question what is to come.Her sombre eyes belie the smile, it’s true;
(grin in place of smile)the stately pose keeps dignity, and yet
amusement at Da Vinci still shines through.
How true. I believe!Is she a prank deliberately set
by Leonardo’s cunning hand, in joy?
It’s certainly a smile we can’t forget.
(smirk in place of smile)The maestro’s been suspected of a ploy
that camouflages gender in his art;
perhaps his Lisa really is a boy?
Oh boy - could it be?Is this the joke they shared right from the start,
that Gioconda’s model held his heart?
What a memorable close/couplet.