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Nov 15 06, 09:23
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Ornate Oracle
Group: Centurion
Posts: 4,592
Joined: 31-October 03
From: New Jersey
Member No.: 39
Real Name: John
Writer of: Poetry
Referred By:Larry Carr
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My apologies to all I may have overlooked....your name may not be here in print, but your creative spirit thrives in my consciousness.....OUR MM FAMILY
Mosaic Musings is a safe, cordial oasis, where positive support is our prime emphasis.
Daniel delights us with forms obscure, their content takes us on a poetic tour.
Lori weaves a balance, being honest and gentle, compassionately creative; oftentimes sentimental. John from down under, a wise and witty chap writes of faraway places we can’t find on a map. Liz is graciously kind in offering studied crits, always even-tempered never throws a fit. Don’s a midwestern guy, who loves the outdoors from farmlands to the sea, he has a zest to explore.
Cathy’s gentle nature brightens our days, her exuberant disposition keeps gray skies at bay. Dennis is a newbie and a tiger by name, sex, dialogue and religion spirit his proverbial flame.
Snow writes lyrically from across the pond; it’s her flowered verses that sweetens our bond.
Alan’s a judicious fellow in this workshop community, his satirical perspectives offer a unique sense of unity.
Aggie may reside in Borneo, but her heart lives here with this literate group, she is a much respected peer.
Oh’ Steve is one man who’s never gloomy or sad he’s been a loyal pal during good times and bad.
Cyn’s natural sentiment is a virtue to behold, she freely shares it with friends new and old.
Eric, alias Merlin pens visions of clouds and snow, their tranquil images cast a comforting glow.
Sylvia from Argentina way paints with bucolic words, vibrant landscaped horizons of rivers and colorful birds.
We are much richer today for this infusion of good will this friendly, warm refuge leaves us all jubilantly fulfilled.
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Give thanks for your new friends of today, but never forget the warm hugs of your yesterdays.
Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here!MM Award Winner
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Nov 15 06, 12:39
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Group: Gold Member
Posts: 3,822
Joined: 3-August 03
From: Florida
Member No.: 10
Real Name: Elizabeth
Writer of: Poetry
Referred By:Lori Kanter
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Oh John this is beautiful. Probably the best gift anyone could give Mosaic Musings, but a snapshot of some members who make up the heart of MM and If I can return with a proper critique, I will but would also like to add a stanza on behalf of our Jly... We cannot forget the flame that feeds the fires of inspiration within all of us here! :)
Hugs, Liz
Possibility for a new stanza that will sit between the last two stanzas...
and then there's me; a simple man who shares the depths of my heart through poetry, painting a view that can tell tales of love, and life...I do my part!
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Nov 15 06, 18:47
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I'm smiling!! This is a wonderful poem! Not to mention a sweet thing to do for our MM family! Thanks John~ Cathy
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Nov 15 06, 18:50
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Group: Gold Member
Posts: 185
Joined: 3-October 06
From: DFW Texas
Member No.: 278
Real Name: Dennis Martin
Writer of: Poetry & Prose
Referred By:Cynthia Neely
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QUOTE(AMETHYST @ Nov 15 06, 11:39 ) [snapback]87195[/snapback] Oh John this is beautiful. Probably the best gift anyone could give Mosaic Musings, but a snapshot of some members who make up the heart of MM and If I can return with a proper critique, I will but would also like to add a stanza on behalf of our Jly... We cannot forget the flame that feeds the fires of inspiration within all of us here! :)
Hugs, Liz
Possibility for a new stanza that will sit between the last two stanzas...
and then there's me; a simple man who shares the depths of my heart through poetry, painting a view that can tell tales of love, and life...I do my part! Here! Here!
Add it! Add it!(And thanks for adding this 'radical' newbie into your list)
I am truly humbled.Dennis!
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Faith is a fine invention for gentlemen who see, but microscopes are prudent in an emergency! -Emily DickinsonMM Award Winner
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Nov 18 06, 05:47
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Group: Gold Member
Posts: 18,596
Joined: 2-August 03
From: Southwest New Jersey, USA
Member No.: 6
Real Name: Daniel J Ricketts, Sr.
Writer of: Poetry
Referred By:Lori
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Fantatic job, John! (although most of my forms aren't obscure! It's my humor that's obscure! ) Liz nailed it for the additional verse too! deLightin' to be a part o' it all, Daniel
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Nov 20 06, 03:10
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Group: Gold Member
Posts: 764
Joined: 18-October 04
From: Sabah, Malaysia
Member No.: 80
Writer of: Poetry
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Nov 20 06, 06:43
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Mosaic Master
Group: Administrator
Posts: 18,892
Joined: 1-August 03
From: Massachusetts
Member No.: 2
Real Name: Lori Kanter
Writer of: Poetry & Prose
Referred By:Imhotep
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Oh what a tangled web I weave - NOT! What a great poem John! I agree with Liz - you must add in a stanza for yourself - I'm off to work now but I'll be back with a crit (sort of)... CUL8R ~Cleo
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"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the RingsCollaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. KanterNominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here! "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner
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Nov 29 06, 04:44
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Mosaic Master
Group: Praetorian
Posts: 4,599
Joined: 4-August 03
From: Birmingham, England
Member No.: 12
Real Name: Eira Needham
Writer of: Poetry
Referred By:Lori
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Hi John What a lovely idea for a poem, but I do so agree with Liz that you add a stanza about you along the lines suggetsed by Liz or similar then there's me; a simple man who shares the depths of my heart through poetry, painting a view that can tell tales of love, and life...I do my part You are a big part of MM you know John! Snow
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Dec 17 06, 10:04
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Group: Gold Member
Posts: 624
Joined: 6-August 03
From: Texas
Member No.: 15
Real Name: Marcia
Writer of: Poetry & Prose
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This was a lovely tribute to MM friends. I am interested in reading last year's ......where might I find it ? In archives or just back a ways in the forums? Thanks, Marcia
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"...We are born into the world like a blank canvas and every person that crosses our path takes up the brush and makes their mark upon our surface. So it is that we develop. But we must realize there comes a day that we must take up the brush and finish the work. For only we can determine if we are to be just another painting or a masterpiece..." 1981 Javan (from the book " Meet Me Halfway" ) MM Award Winner
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Dec 17 06, 10:30
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Mosaic Master
Group: Administrator
Posts: 18,892
Joined: 1-August 03
From: Massachusetts
Member No.: 2
Real Name: Lori Kanter
Writer of: Poetry & Prose
Referred By:Imhotep
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Hi John. Once again, I enjoyed re-reading this tribute to those you've written about! A very clever and unique way to summarize each to be sure! I've noted some punctuation nits below. Well done! ~Cleo [add] {delete} Mosaic Musings is a safe, cordial oasis{,} where positive support is our prime emphasis. Daniel delights us with forms obscure{,} [-] their content {takes} [taking] us on a poetic tour. Lori weaves a balance{,} being honest and gentle, compassionately creative; oftentimes sentimental. John from down under{,} a wise and witty chap[,] writes of faraway places we can’t find on a map. Liz is graciously kind in offering studied crits{,}[;] always even-tempered[,] [she] never throws a fit. Don’s a midwestern guy{,} who loves the outdoors from farmlands to the sea, he has a zest to explore. Cathy’s gentle nature brightens our days, her exuberant disposition keeps gray skies at bay. Dennis is a newbie and a tiger by name, sex, dialogue and religion spirit his proverbial flame. Snow writes lyrically from across the pond; it’s her flowered verses that sweetens our bond. Alan’s a judicious fellow in this workshop community, his satirical perspectives offer a unique sense of unity. Aggie may reside in Borneo{,} but her heart lives here with this literate group, she is a much respected peer. Oh’ Steve is one man who’s never gloomy or sad[,] he’s been a loyal pal during good times and bad. Cyn’s natural sentiment is a virtue to behold, she freely shares it with friends new and old. Eric, alias Merlin pens visions of clouds and snow, their tranquil images cast a comforting glow. Sylvia from Argentina way paints with bucolic words, vibrant landscaped horizons of rivers and colorful birds. We are much richer today for this infusion of good will [-] this friendly, warm refuge leaves us all jubilantly fulfilled.
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"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the RingsCollaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. KanterNominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here! "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner
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Dec 17 06, 16:52
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Ornate Oracle
Group: Centurion
Posts: 4,592
Joined: 31-October 03
From: New Jersey
Member No.: 39
Real Name: John
Writer of: Poetry
Referred By:Larry Carr
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Marcia, The last one was posted in Homers in August of 05. I have copied it and pasted it here for you to read.....
FALL ABOARD
Fall is the perfect season to muse changing landscapes, framed in glorious hues. What better time to take a trip, either by car, train or a sailing ship.
Let me take you on a mirthful journey with a group of travelers with a poetic yearning. They look to energize their creativity with lyrical images void of any negativity.
I bring before you this cast and crew whose lives we know through and through. Warm affections echo their unique identity; providing us with a welcome dose of serenity.
A connection that developed a few months ago has held firm and even continued to grow. We all delightfully share a common bond of our experiences we collaboratively correspond.
The social director is a fair young maiden who is eternally demur and never brazen. To her family and friends she’s simply known as Lorraine, her temperament is as sweet as a gentle drop of rain.
The conductor has a devious grin and a hearty laugh, cause he thinks that he is the chief of staff. He goes by the pseudonym of Zeus, his writing style for some, is just a tad bit obtuse.
David provides us with an electronic link, his witty postings make us ponder and think. To all of us he is a nobleman and a knight, sheathed in an internet armor ever so bright.
Susan’s warm thoughts provide us with an emotional spark, as she has shown us how to be young at heart. Her tender offerings have won her many fans, she is viewed by all as a genuine good Samaritan.
Linda’s generous spirit makes us want to commune, her reassuring words are always in tune. Her compassion and caring are virtues to behold as she freely shares them with friends, new and old.
Alan loves life and all it has to offer, it’s the companionship of his peers he most prefers. Always seemingly content to be just a role player, his lifelong dream is to be our morning mayor.
Although separated by many miles, Lucie’s good nature sends us exuberant smiles. Her perky personality suits her to a tee, she could easily be a Mosaic emcee.
Ron is overflowing with clever ideas, his topical comments bring a round of cheers. A modern day bard with a penchant for Shakespeare, his poems are classical, but never austere.
Our literary family has opened my eyes to Homer’s Homilies and Punner’s Paradise. To reach a coveted place on the Wall of Fame is all that many of us wish to proclaim.
Homers
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Give thanks for your new friends of today, but never forget the warm hugs of your yesterdays.
Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here!MM Award Winner
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