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 Aug 24 10, 23:36
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 Laureate Legionnaire  Posts: 3,446 Joined: 16-October 06 From: UK Member No.: 298 Real Name: Alan McAlpine Douglas Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori/Eisa/loads of old friends  |
ANALOGY - HUNG LIKE A HORSE
Better by far to be hung like a horse than a sheep stealer .... Alan McAlpine Douglas ·······  ······· |
  
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Aug 25 10, 17:35
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 Assyrian Posts: 262 Joined: 4-February 09 Member No.: 756 Real Name: Robin DeWalt Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Winning Writer's web site |
 Still up to your old tricks I see. This made me laugh Alan. I'm sure I'll be repeating it.Robin ······· ······· |
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Aug 25 10, 17:41
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Laureate Legionnaire Posts: 3,446 Joined: 16-October 06 From: UK Member No.: 298 Real Name: Alan McAlpine Douglas Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori/Eisa/loads of old friends |
Dear Robin,
You are very kind. Full attribution, of course ! I do enjoy this English language of ours .... Love Alan ······· ······· |
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Aug 30 10, 00:35
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 Ornate Oracle Posts: 3,822 Joined: 3-August 03 From: Florida Member No.: 10 Real Name: Elizabeth Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori Kanter |
Hi Alan,
I still cannot wipe the smile from my face that was placed there by this wonderfully light and yet, profound poem. I cannot see anything to add to it or change, without changing and losing the tongue in cheek humor that makes it unique and worth the read. Big Hugs ... and don't go stealing any sheep - Liz ······· ·······Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more details, click here!
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Aug 30 10, 05:37
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Laureate Legionnaire Posts: 3,446 Joined: 16-October 06 From: UK Member No.: 298 Real Name: Alan McAlpine Douglas Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori/Eisa/loads of old friends |
Dear Liz,
Thank you my dear, I love making people laugh ! Have not stolen any sheep in a while. Come to think of it, none of this poem has been true in a while. Love Alan ······· ······· |
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Aug 30 10, 15:16
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 Mosaic Master  Posts: 4,599 Joined: 4-August 03 From: Birmingham, England Member No.: 12 Real Name: Eira Needham Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori |
Hi Alan
I do love your sense of humour! I cannot think of a word to change in this, without spoiling it. Write on!!!! Snow 
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Laugh loud & often - it's medicinal. Write from the heart - it's therapeutic. Beauty comes from within - the outer is just skin! Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more details, click here! MM Award Winner   |
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Aug 31 10, 07:23
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Alan, I can picture the horse hanging high off the scaffolding, whispering over to you, next to him, Well this is another fine mess you've gotten me into..... or now what Kimosabe?....I will not go to that other place. I willl not , not not not...
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Aug 31 10, 10:54
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Laureate Legionnaire Posts: 3,446 Joined: 16-October 06 From: UK Member No.: 298 Real Name: Alan McAlpine Douglas Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori/Eisa/loads of old friends |
Dear Eisa and Steve,
Aha, so nice to make an impact ! Steve, I admire your honourable efforts to keep the party clean .... Love Alan ······· ······· |
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