Oh no, no, no ...Alan this is marvelous. You can still pen a smile, followed by hearty laughter while maintaining a straightforward poetic voice. Loved this. I especially caught the duality of black sheep - such a great handle on humorous poetics ...
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The poem :
BRAVEPART
If anything itches
while you’re in your britches
we’ve the thing that will make you right proud
it’s our even itchier kilt
made from, and for, the black sheep
who wants to stand out from the crowd ....
Alan McAlpine Douglas
Right now I have nothing to improve on it, but if I think of something I will return.
Hugs, Liz