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Aug 25 07, 12:46
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woeman's lib icon statuesque lady
has monumental success...
in-ported French toast © MLee Dickens'son 25 Aug 2007
was "imported"
This post has been edited by JustDaniel: Aug 29 07, 18:31
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Aug 26 07, 15:17
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QUOTE (JustDaniel @ Aug 25 07, 18:46 ) woeman's lib icon statuesque lady
has monumental success...
imported French toast © MLee Dickens'son 25 Aug 2007 Hey Daniel, HaHa, nice one. The only bit I'm not sure of is the ...French toast, don't get me wrong I have it for breakfast all the time but that statue and toast, whats the link? Both imports from france or ....?? Suggest "imported French tart" Now I'm D'lightin in the exchange .
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Aug 26 07, 17:22
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Hey, Terry... just remember that EACH PART -- the title and each of the two snapshots -- either IS or CONTAINS a play on words... thus the last line has a dual meaning... as does the title... and the snapshot of lines one and two... EACH of them! Once you get one or all of them it will stand out like the _ _ _ _ _ _ in _ _ _ / _ _ _ _ / _ _ _ _or. Lightin' the way... Daniel
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Aug 27 07, 04:31
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Morning Daniel;
I agree that many 'harbor' great respect for this beautiful lady. Love your ku and your tribute.
Sam
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Aug 27 07, 05:35
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Thank you very much, Sam... and you're right. Indeed we do! deLightingly, Daniel
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Aug 28 07, 03:38
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QUOTE (JustDaniel @ Aug 25 07, 18:46 ) woeman's lib icon statuesque lady
has monumental success...
inported French toast © MLee Dickens'son 25 Aug 2007
was "imported" Hi Daniel -- I'm feeling dim this morning, why have you changed to 'inported'? Snow
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Aug 28 07, 09:15
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Good to see you, Snow!! I just thought it would add the suggestion mentioned above: She was ported into the port from France, ya know! My revision can be just as easily changed back to the original; I'm looking for suggestions and reactions to help me 'fix' this. Your help and observations are always valuable to me. Lightly, Daniel
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Aug 29 07, 04:33
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QUOTE (JustDaniel @ Aug 28 07, 15:15 ) Good to see you, Snow!! I just thought it would add the suggestion mentioned above: She was ported into the port from France, ya know! My revision can be just as easily changed back to the original; I'm looking for suggestions and reactions to help me 'fix' this. Your help and observations are always valuable to me. Lightly, Daniel Hi Daniel I think either word would be acceptable, but inport might make the reader think its a typo (as I did originally) Great play on words from you as usual Daniel. Snow
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Aug 29 07, 06:24
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Standing statute...
seeking lady lib harbor no hesitation go off the depend
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Aug 29 07, 18:34
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QUOTE (Eisa @ Aug 29 07, 05:33 ) I think either word would be acceptable, but inport might make the reader think its a typo (as I did originally) I think you're right! I've inserted a hyphen. ThanksGreat play on words from you as usual Daniel. ~ Snow Thank you again, Snow.
deLighting in the exchange, Daniel
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Aug 29 07, 18:38
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QUOTE (4rum @ Aug 29 07, 07:24 ) Standing statute...
seeking lady lib harbor no hesitation go off the depend That is a good riposte, my friend. Why not post it either separately or in Karnak and we can discuss it... where our responses can be discussed more deependably and where no one will harbor any hesitation about violating necessary statutes in pursuit of liberty of speech within the appropriate confines of the center of commerce here... Lightly, Daniel
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Aug 30 07, 03:26
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QUOTE (JustDaniel @ Aug 30 07, 00:34 ) QUOTE (Eisa @ Aug 29 07, 05:33 ) I think either word would be acceptable, but inport might make the reader think its a typo (as I did originally) I think you're right! I've inserted a hyphen. ThanksGreat play on words from you as usual Daniel. ~ Snow Thank you again, Snow.
deLighting in the exchange, Daniel Great idea Daniel -- your intent is much clearer now. Snow
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Aug 31 07, 10:07
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Thanks again, Snow. I had not been happy with it even before your comment, but your words made me look at it closer, for which I'm appreciative. deLighting in sharing, Daniel
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