What a nice tribute for a new friend, Sam.
I must try this form sometime! I only have one nit and that is with the use of divine/divinely - reapeating one after the other. In such a short poem, I often tell poets to try and find other words to use so as not to repeat. I offer up a few alternates to ponder: sublimely, ideally, prettily or splendidly.
Her feminine mystique I find divine
Divinely found more precious now than goldEnjoyed!
~Cleo