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Eisa Stone Lady (change to structure of stanzas) Sep 4 13, 16:18
Maureen I had to come back to this - I read it yesterday a... Sep 6 13, 02:04 Psyche Lovely poem, Eira. This is my first read. The imag... Sep 9 13, 00:51 Eisa QUOTE (Psyche @ Sep 9 13, 06:51 ) Lovely... Sep 20 13, 18:06 Peterpan This is a beautiful poem. You are still writing su... Sep 13 13, 07:29 Eisa Thanks Maureen, I have tweaked this a bit and will... Sep 20 13, 18:01 Peterpan QUOTE (Eisa @ Sep 21 13, 01:07 ) Thanks B... Nov 19 13, 03:47 Eisa QUOTE (Peterpan @ Nov 19 13, 08:47 ) Hell... Nov 22 13, 16:49 saore this is a beautiful poem, I feel like there is not... Sep 22 13, 08:59 Eisa QUOTE (saore @ Sep 22 13, 14:59 ) this is... Sep 30 13, 16:11 Eisa A few more tweaks! Snow Oct 22 13, 17:18 Psyche Hey, Eira, what a good idea to begin your poem wit... Oct 23 13, 01:14 Eisa QUOTE (Psyche @ Oct 23 13, 06:14 ) Hey, ... Oct 28 13, 18:14 Cleo_Serapis Hi Snow, I love this! Since I am not prolific... Oct 27 13, 10:45 saore Your revision works fantastically for me. Great j... Oct 27 13, 14:49 Eisa QUOTE (saore @ Oct 27 13, 19:49 ) Your re... Oct 28 13, 18:17 Eisa Hi Lori, I have written another revision, based o... Oct 28 13, 18:21 Cleo_Serapis Snow! I like this one!!! Oct 29 13, 12:51 Cleo_Serapis Hi Snow, Would you be opposed to this being nomin... Nov 18 13, 11:21 Eisa QUOTE (Cleo_Serapis @ Nov 18 13, 16:21 ) ... Nov 22 13, 16:43 Maureen it just keeps getting better - great revision - wo... Nov 19 13, 22:07 Eisa QUOTE (Maureen @ Nov 20 13, 03:07 ) it ju... Nov 22 13, 16:52 Peterpan Awesome Snow! Hugs. Bev Nov 20 13, 05:34 Cleo_Serapis Hi Snow, I just nominated this one "officia... Nov 22 13, 11:44 Eisa QUOTE (Cleo_Serapis @ Nov 22 13, 16:44 ) ... Nov 22 13, 16:55 Psyche I'm so glad Lori nominated this one for IBPC, ... Nov 30 13, 00:25 Cleo_Serapis Lots of luck Snow - I've just sent this in fo... Dec 1 13, 15:03 Psyche That's great, Lori! I'm seconding Snow... Dec 1 13, 23:28 Eisa Thanks everyone! Snow Jan 2 14, 18:58 1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
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