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 May 26 07, 12:16
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 Creative Chieftain  Posts: 600 Joined: 14-April 07 From: Texas Hill Country Member No.: 420 Real Name: Mary Boren Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Kathy Earsman  |
No, I won't be making any more changes to this one, Lori, now that I've sent it on its way, but thanks for your continued interest. If this needs to be moved to the storage vault, please feel free -- or direct me.
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Connecting ... Even Yet "There is in all things - a hidden wholeness." -Thomas Merton MM Award Winner      |
  
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May 26 07, 12:20
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 Mosaic Master  Posts: 18,892 Joined: 1-August 03 From: Massachusetts Member No.: 2 Real Name: Lori Kanter Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Imhotep |
Hi Mary.
I can move this tread into Plato's Pearls for you if you'd like it removd from the crit forum. Another option is that we can create a showcase forum for you (they are 'members only' so no guests have access to them). Let me know if either of these interest you.  ~Cleo ······· ·······"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the Rings
Collaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. Kanter Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here!  "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner      |
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May 26 07, 12:37
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Creative Chieftain Posts: 600 Joined: 14-April 07 From: Texas Hill Country Member No.: 420 Real Name: Mary Boren Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Kathy Earsman |
Can we do both, Lori? I'll definitely be sticking around, so would appreciate having a locker to keep all my stuff together, but would also like to leave this one open for whoever may happen to click and be blessed by the movie as I have been.
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Connecting ... Even Yet "There is in all things - a hidden wholeness." -Thomas Merton MM Award Winner |
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May 27 07, 08:28
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Mosaic Master Posts: 18,892 Joined: 1-August 03 From: Massachusetts Member No.: 2 Real Name: Lori Kanter Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Imhotep |
Hi Mary.
Done and done! Your new showcase forum is located here. Please read the sticky topic I posted for you there and congrats!  I'll also move this entire thread into Plato's Pearls for you which is a non-crit forum. Cheers ~Cleo ······· ·······"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the Rings
Collaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. Kanter Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here! "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner |
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May 27 07, 09:06
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Creative Chieftain Posts: 600 Joined: 14-April 07 From: Texas Hill Country Member No.: 420 Real Name: Mary Boren Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Kathy Earsman |
Thanks heaps, Lori -- you're a great hostess. May you be blessed.
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Connecting ... Even Yet "There is in all things - a hidden wholeness." -Thomas Merton MM Award Winner |
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May 27 07, 09:45
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Mosaic Master Posts: 18,892 Joined: 1-August 03 From: Massachusetts Member No.: 2 Real Name: Lori Kanter Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Imhotep |
Awe, shuckums - thanks Mary!
 -Moving thread now.... ······· ·······"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the Rings
Collaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. Kanter Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here! "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner |
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May 28 07, 12:36
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 Creative Chieftain Posts: 1,802 Joined: 24-April 04 From: Connecticut Member No.: 58 Real Name: Ron Jones Writer of: Poetry |
Dear Mary,
No need to think I could provide a tweak! I've only read the two final versions- don't know precisely how you got there but You've written what I call when I write them, a think piece. You have taken thought and dosed it with both a modicum of inspiration and of fervor. You know that I place form above message and that's because I can handle form better than message. You have always impressed me with your powerful messages, presented in great form along with your ability too to write light. Now if we could only tweak ourselves! Nicely, nicely done! Cheers, Ron jgd ······· ······· |
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Jun 2 07, 12:19
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Creative Chieftain Posts: 600 Joined: 14-April 07 From: Texas Hill Country Member No.: 420 Real Name: Mary Boren Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Kathy Earsman |
Thanks very much, Ron. Sorry, I didn't mean to ignore your nice comment -- I just didn't realize this forum was open to response. Yes, I'd like that self-tweaking capability too.
Mary ······· ·······Mary Sullivan Boren
Connecting ... Even Yet "There is in all things - a hidden wholeness." -Thomas Merton MM Award Winner |
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Jun 17 07, 11:32
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 Laureate Legionnaire Posts: 1,250 Joined: 2-August 03 From: USA Member No.: 7 Writer of: Poetry |
Hi Nada,
I enjoyed the inspirational melody of your verse and the metaphor rings true!  Very rich with sounds and a great message within! Thanks for sharing your song. Lindi ······· ·······"Imagination is more important than knowledge and encircles the world"
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Aug 24 07, 14:05
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Mary,
Awesome verse. And a melodious amen to this gorgeous poem of yours. I'm blessed. Bless you - Anne |
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Aug 25 07, 16:44
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Creative Chieftain Posts: 600 Joined: 14-April 07 From: Texas Hill Country Member No.: 420 Real Name: Mary Boren Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Kathy Earsman |
Thanks very much, ladies. Again, please forgive my oversight in acknowledging responses here. I forget there's a world beyond Hermes.
-M. ······· ·······Mary Sullivan Boren
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Aug 26 07, 01:30
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 Ornate Oracle Posts: 18,591 Joined: 2-August 03 From: Southwest New Jersey, USA Member No.: 6 Real Name: Daniel J Ricketts, Sr. Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori |
Ah... there's not a lot to say that hasn't been said...
and you've said it well... as I've learned to expect. deLightin' to read, Daniel 
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 Oct 3 07, 16:47
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 Assyrian Posts: 181 Joined: 13-September 07 From: Conway, Arkansas Member No.: 468 Real Name: Pamela Writer of: Poetry Referred By:self |
Mary this is so very beautiful I feel blessed to have read it. Exquisite, eloquent and best of all...written from a beautiful and loving heart.
Blessings, Pami
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Nov 4 07, 10:45
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Mosaic Master Posts: 18,892 Joined: 1-August 03 From: Massachusetts Member No.: 2 Real Name: Lori Kanter Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Imhotep |
Congrats Mary on your wizard award winning tile!
 Well done!   ~Cleo 
······· ·······"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the Rings
Collaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. Kanter Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here! "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner |
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