 F**K [ definitions added 2/15 ], common meter, rhyming abab |
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 Feb 14 07, 19:02
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 Ornate Oracle  Posts: 18,591 Joined: 2-August 03 From: Southwest New Jersey, USA Member No.: 6 Real Name: Daniel J Ricketts, Sr. Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori  |
F**K
His IM scrawled, F A I K that firk did feck my fisk. I’m givin’ myself flak today. Oh, why’d I take the risk? My online bud was in a funk; his roomie’d used a fork to kill his falk and old pet skunk then ate ‘em like they’s pork. Some folk had finked about his friend, and now he knew they’d facked. Black, bloody feak told his skunk's end; his bird and fish were whacked. © MLee Dickens’son 14 Feb 2006 IM = Instant Message F A I K = Far As I Know firk = freak feck = steal fisk = fish flak = flack funk = depressed mood fork = dining instrument with tangs falk = razor beak folk = people fink = drop a dime, spill the beans, rat fack = tell the truth (give facts) feak = lock of hair ·······  ·······Slow down; things will go faster!
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Feb 18 07, 22:12
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 Creative Chieftain Posts: 883 Joined: 2-January 06 From: Washington State USA Member No.: 145 Writer of: Poetry |
LOL
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Feb 19 07, 10:54
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 Creative Chieftain Posts: 1,621 Joined: 18-August 05 From: Johannesburg, South Africa Member No.: 127 Real Name: Beverleigh Gail Annegarn Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Jox |
AWESOME! You are a clever dude!
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Feb 20 07, 13:26
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Ornate Oracle Posts: 18,591 Joined: 2-August 03 From: Southwest New Jersey, USA Member No.: 6 Real Name: Daniel J Ricketts, Sr. Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori |
Cyn and PP...
Thanks for your visits. I wrote this in response to a comment by Norm re something else that I'd written, noting that I'd produced a poem with four-letter word that began with F and ended in K, congratulating me on the 'feat'... so I just kind of HAD to produce something with several MORE... ya know? Lightly, Daniel 
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Feb 28 07, 06:13
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 Mosaic Master  Posts: 18,892 Joined: 1-August 03 From: Massachusetts Member No.: 2 Real Name: Lori Kanter Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Imhotep |
 Not only is the title an attention grabber but the rhymes within are spot-on Daniel! Enjoyed this one!  ~Cleo 
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Mar 3 07, 12:31
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 Laureate Legionnaire Posts: 1,250 Joined: 2-August 03 From: USA Member No.: 7 Writer of: Poetry |
Hey Daniel,
Hee, hee! You write about the four-letter-words so well! A very clever piece, reminding me of an adult story written by Dr. Seuss. As always, thanks for the humor! Lindi ······· ·······"Imagination is more important than knowledge and encircles the world"
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Jul 2 07, 13:06
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Ornate Oracle Posts: 18,591 Joined: 2-August 03 From: Southwest New Jersey, USA Member No.: 6 Real Name: Daniel J Ricketts, Sr. Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori |
QUOTE (Cleo_Serapis @ Feb 28 07, 07:13 )  Not only is the title an attention grabber but the rhymes within are spot-on Daniel!Enjoyed this one! ~ Cleo I see I have a few responses to catch up on... so thank you much for your feedback. As I implied earlier, titles are very important to me... so I see this worked... and I'm pleased you felt the rhyming and meter. deLighting in sharing again, Daniel
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Jul 2 07, 13:08
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Ornate Oracle Posts: 18,591 Joined: 2-August 03 From: Southwest New Jersey, USA Member No.: 6 Real Name: Daniel J Ricketts, Sr. Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori |
QUOTE (Aphrodite @ Mar 3 07, 13:31 ) Hey Daniel, Hee, hee! You write about the four-letter-words so well! A very clever piece, reminding me of an adult story written by Dr. Seuss. As always, thanks for the humor! ~ Lindi I hadn't thought about Dr. Seuss, but I guess this could be kind of an adult version, huh? Thanks for your smile! ... and who's the big guy?! [ We've not been introduced. ] sLightly curious, Daniel
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