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Larry
post May 18 23, 11:32
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My glass duck doesn’t Chirp, Cluck or Quack
with a garden hose screwed in its crack.
Water sprays from its bill
with a whistle, quite shrill
as it’s rotating forth and then back.


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post May 22 23, 05:30
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rotten tater pulled forth then thrown back
in the ground; he would rather face lack
than to bite that moist spud
he'll just chew on his cud
and then open a can of hard tack


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post May 26 23, 10:55
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I’ve not heard of hard tack being canned.
It’s supply far outstrips the demand
which has waned from creation
of good dehydration.
It is food but the taste is quite bland.


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post May 28 23, 07:01
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If the hardtack you've chewed on is bland
then perhaps you might try a new brand
You could take a good chaw
in the side of your maw
as you'll see that this Hardtacck is canned!


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post May 29 23, 11:06
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If that Hardtack is canned, I will see
whether it tastes much better to me
but until I can taste
my doubts won’t be erased.
If it is then I guess I’d agree.


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post May 30 23, 14:04
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Chawed tobacco will not taste as great
as the typical food on your plate
but the feel of a chaw
there inside of your jaw
could incite you to maul your next date


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post Jun 1 23, 11:24
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I once went to a mall with my date
to find rings, to propose; be my mate
but there’s no place to go
just like San Francisco;
all the stores have now moved out of state.


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post Jun 1 23, 13:46
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What happened to the "Add Reply" Tab and such?!


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post Jun 1 23, 20:55
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Daniel, this is only happening in the limerick panel. I sent a message to Lori about it but no reply or fix as of yet. The box is extremely wide so you need to put your curser at the bottom and run to the right.


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post Jun 2 23, 00:53
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When the stores in your state have moved out
you should find a replacement, no doubt,
but there's no guarantee
that you'll find something free
so just shop there and cut out the pout!


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post Jun 3 23, 21:35
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I don’t pout when I’m out shopping lees
in the stores that close doors to appease.
Just don’t bring it down south;
you’ll get punched in the mouth
pushing sexual proclivities.


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JustDaniel
post Yesterday, 09:13 AM
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Pushing sex you're all pro libertines?
I should think you'd be pro in-betweens
since you're all grouchy grumps
come from ancient mug-wumps
who eat lunches of mixed salad greens!


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