Hey Dan! This is a marvellous poem. I love the way you've handled the issue of an unloved world, which it really is, they way things stand today. Not that nobody cares for the planet, but the powerful ones just tread over and destroy all the world's natural beauties.
Your finale is very sad, it makes me want to cry. Just so...
I suppose my only question is that you've strayed from the traditional gender of the world, but why not? Just coz the Greeks called her Gaia doesn't mean we all have to follow suit...
Psyche
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Mis temas favoritos The Lord replied, my precious, precious child, I love you and I would never leave you. During your times of trial and suffering, when you see only one set of footprints, it was then that I carried you.
"There is no life higher than the grasstops Or the hearts of sheep, and the wind Pours by like destiny, bending Everything in one direction."
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