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 Feb 24 17, 07:00
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 Ornate Oracle  Posts: 4,592 Joined: 31-October 03 From: New Jersey Member No.: 39 Real Name: John Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Larry Carr  |
Dreams, Alive and Well [center][/center]
The beach was eerie, as still air lingered, in full darkness, no stars could be seen, only a lone moonbeam sparkled on high where ocean avenue met street eighteen. Its been twenty years since love peaked, on a burgundy blanket we became one, baring our bodies and baring our souls, emotions taxed, promises never to be undone What the night knew, it wouldn't divulge, the sounds of silence deafening for us both, fear of letting go was a mask we wore, in the damp sand we etched a faithful oath. Recollections of her snip at my consciousness; What became of that high school queen? Her steel gray eyes and auburn hair, continue to emblazon each and every dream. Words used (in order of appearance): star, sparkle, twenty, love, burgundy, tax, mask, recollect snip, steel ·······  ·······Give thanks for your new friends of today, but never forget the warm hugs of your yesterdays.
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Feb 26 17, 19:02
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 Mosaic Master  Posts: 18,892 Joined: 1-August 03 From: Massachusetts Member No.: 2 Real Name: Lori Kanter Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Imhotep |
I can do relate!!! Mine was even longer.
······· ·······"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the Rings
Collaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. Kanter Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here!  "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner   |
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JLY x10 - 2/18/17 - JLY Feb 24 17, 07:00 
JustDaniel Well done, John...
and I think you ought to offer... Feb 24 17, 13:32 JLY Daniel,
Thank you; it has been a very busy year. ... Feb 24 17, 13:51 Larry Hello John,
It is so nice to see you back and ans... Feb 25 17, 10:20 JLY Larry,
Thank you. It is not a true story, however... Feb 25 17, 20:04 Cleo_Serapis Hi John,
It's so nice to read your poetry ag... Feb 26 17, 17:32 JLY Lori,
Thank you. I had a topsy turvy year and I n... Feb 26 17, 18:25 
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